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Routines - (practicing Simple present) Hi everyone, I tell you about me and my brother`s routines, every day I get up at five o`clock a.m, after I take a shower and clean my teeth, I make my breakfast at quarter to six, always I include some of fruit. Then I go to study in the University until twelve o`clock, We have Class to class break (I don`t know how say: "rest enter each class" word) and I use it for talk with my University`s partnerts, have a lunch and play soccer in the footbal field until two p.m, later take a bus and I go to home for make some snack, and inmediatly I study and make my university`s homework for the rest of the afternoon, between seven o`clock and quarter to eigth I have dinner, I check social media, and News until eigth o`clock, later I go to Street Park Gym and I do strength Exercise. later I go home, clean my teeth and I go to sleep Watching TV movies.This is a general Routine Day, Sometime is different especially when I go to work on Weekend. The Routine of my Brother is some different, He has thirteen and he studies in the highschool, he sleeps until seven o`clock a.m and gets up at half to seven, my mom makes his breakfast while he takes a shower and cleans her teeths, after that He takes His school bus and He goes to school until six o`clock p.m, He has lunch and snacks in hour of lunch, He receives a snacks with fruit, sandwich or something like these, He arrives to home at half to eigth and He has dinner, after He starts to study until nine o`clock when He has finish He goes to clean his teeth and Goes to sleep. Thanks for your correction. i still make well see you later

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Hi everyone, I would like to tell you about me and my brothers routines, every day I get up at 


Hi everyone, I would like to tell you about me and my brothers routines, every day I get up at five a.m. after I take a shower and clean my teeth, I make my breakfast at quarter to six, I always include some fruit. Then I go to study in the University until twelve o` clock. We have breaks between classes and I use it for talking with my university partners, have a lunch and play soccer in the football field until two p.m., later I take a bus home, make some snacks, I study and complete my university homework for the rest of the afternoon. Between seven o`clock and quarter to eight I have dinner, I check social media, and watch the news until eight o`clock. Later I go to the Street Park Gym and I do strength exercise. After that I go home, clean my teeth and I go to sleep watching TV movies. This is a normal day for me. Sometimes it is different, especially when I go to work at the weekend. The routine of my brother is different, he is thirteen and he studies in the high school he sleeps until seven a.m. and gets up at half past seven. My mom makes his breakfast while he takes a shower and cleans his teeth, after that he takes his school bus, he goes to school until six p.m. He has lunch and snacks which are fruit and a sandwich or something like that. He arrives to home at 7.30p.m. and he has dinner, later he starts to study until nine o`clock. When he has finished he goes to clean his teeth and go to sleep.

 Thanks for your correction. I still make well (I still make good?)

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Routines - (practicing Simple present)

Hi everyone, I would like to tell all of you about me and my brother's routine. Every day I get up at five o`clock a.m. and take a shower and clean/ brush my teeth, I make my breakfast at a quarter to six, I always  include some fruit. Then I go study at the University until twelve o`clock. We have breaks in between classes. (I don`t know how say: "rest enter each class" word)  I use my breaks to talk with my University partners. I eat lunch and play soccer  on the footbal field until two p.m. and then later  I take the bus home and when I get home I make some snacks and immediately I study and do my university homework for the rest of the afternoon, in between seven o`clock and quarter to eight. After that i have dinner and I check social media and the News until eight o`clock.  then later I go to the Street Park Gym and I do strength Exercises.  after the gym I go home clean/brush my teeth and then I go to sleep Watching movies.This is my general daily Routine.  Sometimes it is different, especially when I have to work on the  Weekends.
The Routine of my Brother is some what  different, He is thirteen and he is a highschool student. He sleeps until seven o`clock a.m and then he gets up.  my mom makes his breakfast while he takes a shower and cleans/brushes his teeth. after that He takes the school bus and He goes to school until six o`clock p.m.  He gets an hour for lunch and snacks.  He receives a snack with fruit and a sandwich or something like that. He arrives  home at a half to eight and He has dinner. after dinner He starts studying until nine o`clock. when He is finish He goes and cleans/brushes his teeth and Goes to sleep.

Thanks for your correction. i still make well

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