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- 3 little things 1.My best friend broke up with her boyfriend yesterday. 2.I finally have got a job, it has not too much salary, but it may help me to get a better job in two years. 3.My brother has not get married yet, he even has no gilfriend, my mom is worried about this.I think it is not the right time for him to meet his true love, so why dont he wait for some time ? 4.I want to finish watching Criminal minds, because I was told that it will be back in October. Please correct my mistakes in this essay. Thank you !!August 11, 201560
- 煮熟 - 你得把鸡肉煮熟，否则你会生病的。√ 尊贵 - 尊贵的客人们，欢迎来我们的陈述。( we always say “尊敬的客人” in sentences. “尊贵” is used as adjustive to describe people. you can say “她看起来很高贵”) 推荐 - 我是新来的，请你推荐一些好餐厅给我。√ 勤劳 - 她是一个勤劳的人。√ 抓狂 - 她不断的唠叨让我抓狂了。√ 概括 - 我快要出去了，请你概括一下你的主意。(“概括” is used like this: "请概括一下文章", in this sentence you can say "我快要出去了，请你简要说明一下你的主意") 充足 - 做饭给两个人吃，一杯米是充足的。(in this sentence, you should use "足够" instead of "充足". The two words is both mean "enough". you can use "充足" like this : "如果我们想去野营就应该有充足的食物" means if we want to go camping, we should have enough food.) 心神不定 - 最近他看起来非常心神不定。√ 趋势 - 最近，我国经历贫穷有上涨的趋势√ 显示 - 当遇到困难的时候，他显示出极大的勇敢(we say “表现得很勇敢” or “表现得十分勇敢” instead of “显示出极大的勇敢”. you can say "显示出极大的勇气". And something wrong with"极大的勇敢". If you want to say "very brave", you can say "十分勇敢" or "很勇敢". If you want to use "极大的", ) Hope these can help you.0 votedJuly 19, 20152
- A tiring day I got up early this morning to catch a bus. Because I have a appointment with some girls. Actually, it is a meeting to exchange our experience in dancing. We danced in the whole morning. I found that everyone has own way to learn and practice dancing. We were really happy to know other methods to dance well. I didn't eat too much food. So I was first one to get hungry. We finished the meeting at 5:00 pm. Then we went home . It was a happy day. But I am so tired now. I will go to bed early this night. Please correct the mistakes in this essay, thank you so much !July 3, 201550
我下个月的旅行
七月七号我要（去）中国去旅行一点儿了。去中国（之前）给我（有）很多任务（事情要做），比如申请签证，买火车票，等等。因为我要（独自/单独）旅行单独的，我觉得我最大的任务是学习汉语。我在大学的专业是法语和西班牙语的翻译，我的辅修科目是汉语，所以我还说得说汉语不太错（汉语说得还不错）。可是学汉语比尔（和）学欧洲的语言很不同。欧洲的语言多很痛的（都是相似的/相同的），多（都）有字母和单词。欧洲的语言的语法很难，但是也很同（类似/相似）。因为我要说得说（要想说好）汉语很好，我必须学习很多汉子（字），短语和语法。我觉得这个任务就是男的（很难/有些难），可是也（很）有很多意思。请祝我好运！
First of all, welcome to China. And I hope you can speak mardarin fluently soon.
I want to give you some advice about this essay.
1. 很痛? （Do you mean 'similar' or 'same' ? If so, you can say '相同' means same, '相似，类似' means similar.）
2. 任务 and 事情 （任务 means 'task', 事情 means 'thing'. 任务 means the thing sb. ask you to do,you have to finish it. 事情 means you want to do ）
Hope it will help you .
0 votedJune 28, 20152当我10岁的时间（时候）
我要学（讲）关于一个（关于）我第一次喜欢的女孩（的故事）。我认为我是10或者9岁的时候。我只是记得她有（长着）金发。在那个时间（时候）我们j经常老（在）麦当劳的游戏长（站）里玩了（也许不是麦当劳，关于这个事情，我的回以（记忆）不太好（清晰）。因为非常九的时候（是很久之前的事情））。我认为我的家人欢迎她家人的邮箱（来信）。所以那个时候要为（给）她写信息。她家人每个时间（经常）去住其他的州（住）， 所以很难只是给她信息。我也记得一个时间（有一次）我尝试打电话给她。我认为（那时）是这样的：
*她的爸爸接电话* “为（喂）？”
我： “为（喂）， Emily在吗？”
她的爸爸（用）一钟（种）（可怕的语气）的回复（道）让我还怕： “你是谁啊？！ 她的姓叫什么？！”
我： "...” *去问妈妈"Emily的姓叫什么？”
＊妈妈的回复（告诉）给（了）我她的姓＊
*我（在）电脑里（上）说Emily的姓*
我认为那个时间前面（时候之前）（You can say '我认为在那之前'），她的爸爸允许我和Emily（在）电脑上讲话（聊天）。那个时间（时候）她爸爸的声音让我还怕（害怕）。现在（我）不知到（知道）Emily在哪里（，）因为她每个时候（经常）去其他的州，所以现在没有她的邮箱， 而且（我也）没有她的电话号码。可是还有一个纸上她发给我的信息（Do you mean a letter she wrote to you ?），（是邮箱里， 可是不知到怎么说， 从一个机器让（把）她的信息成为（变成）（写在）纸上的信息）。我个人觉得如果现在（用那个纸）发给她（发）信息用那个纸（Do you mean write to her ?）， 要（会）很奇怪， 也许让她或者她的爸爸非常还怕（害怕）， 所以（我）认为我不一定做这个（要这么做）。 你们认为什么（呢）？Hello, I find something you always confuse it.
1. 时间 and 时候 （时间 is 'time' in English, 时候 means 'the moment'. You can say '当它发生的时候' means 'When it happens'）
2. 每个时间 （I dont know what do you really mean. Do you mean 'every year' ? You can say '每年'. If you mean 'always,often,usually', you can say '经常'）
3. The word we use to mean scared is '害怕', not '还怕'. You can also say '恐惧'.
Hope that will help you.
0 votedJune 28, 20152
