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I've met so many really interesting people in the United States with different lives & backgrounds who have learned English - I want to be able to connect with them and understand their cultures more, visit their countries and try their food ;) I've taken some small classes before, but never had enough practice to remember the vocabulary well, and my listening understanding is really bad.
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    The First Dorm Bart Party

    Last night, I went to a bar with my roommates for the first time. To be honest, I didn't want to go but it was the first party for our dormitory so I thought I should go.The bar was noisy and crowded and I was a bit lost. I didn't like the atmosphere there and I just wanted to go back. But as time went by, I got used to it, I also found some fun there. In spite of that, the experience was enough for me to have only once.😌

    ...mostly just put it all in the past tense to match the first sentence, and the here -> there location perspective to match the fact you are not currently there :)

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    March 11, 2019
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    1. He forgot to fit the handle to that mop , so it cannot be used now.

    2. To chop down a tree is a very difficult thing for these children.

    3. The bear was groaning and crashed to the ground.

    4. She was crying mournfully.

    5. My mother always loses her keys.

    6. This patient often suffers severe pain.

    7. Don't tell anyone that he or she is a foolishness person.

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    March 11, 2019
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    MY NEW FLOWER

    I like flowers. When my home is full of flowers, I feel full of energy, so I often visit the flower shop every week.
    My friend bought three different flowers for me from KUNMING, the city abounds with flowers. There are roses, lilies and sunflowers.
    After I received them, I spent lots of time arranging them in vases.
    I needed to cut off the redundant leaves and put some water in each vase.
    When I finished doing that, I found what my apartment looks like in Spring, and it smells wonderful!
    Thanks for giving me those beautiful flowers.
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    February 27, 2019
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    February 27, 2019
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    February 27, 2019
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    The cross-country run went lovely, with some touching stories. I thought that the route and conditions would be a problem for the children, but when facing these difficulties, they were more brave than their parents! The adults hadn’t realized how determined their children could be until they attended the event together. Some parents who had done running training unexpectedly found that they held their kids back in the competition. The event provided a great opportunity for parents to take their children to get close to nature and create unforgettable memories. Those who had run in a lot of previous events before but never won any prizes, surprisingly gained one by the strength of their children.

    Grace, the youngest player from the 8k group, stated that ā€œThe most important thing is not to win but to participate.ā€

    Grace’s dad said, ā€œKeeping the competitions at a moderate level for children is good. For them, spending quality time with parents and learning some invaluable concepts from the games are more desirable.ā€

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    February 27, 2019
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    The Family Bonding Run was a big success!

    The weather was brilliant - it cleared up after 8:00 am. A total of 285 players from China, Japan, South Korea, Malaysia, Australia and Turkey came to the event, divided into 5km and 8km groups. They did not get cold feet by the continuous rainy days leading up to the event as weather itself is a part of nature. The organizer encouraged the children to experience and interact with nature on the premise of being prepared, learning safety, facing weather changes together and learning how to maintain competition equipment.

    (let me know if any questions about the changes! :)

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    February 27, 2019
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    1. all good, except "she" isn't capitalized since it's not an actual name or title. 2. "Even so" should be capitalized, since it's the beginning of a sentence, and "job" should be the plural "any jobs" 3. perfect 4. Good, but I would leave out "of money" to make it flow better, since money is already mentioned in the first part of the sentence. 5. Ok, but leaves some doubt to what you're trying to explain... perhaps say "nonetheless, I could have afforded a larger one".
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    December 1, 2015
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    It's in a list of requests for him from others, so I assume it's requests for money from him. He must be wealthy or his company is. I don't know what "boot" means, I would guess it's British English slang since some of the spelling is British instead of American spelling (as in "programme" instead of "program").
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    December 1, 2015
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    It's important for anything beyond casual texting. It would definitely be noticed in a work email, and could break up the flow of the sentence, though would be understand unless they're super picky about grammar. It just looks more professional to know when to use it and when not to, looks bad if you get it wrong: it's versus its, and their versus they're versus there.
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    December 1, 2015
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