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Could you please correct my notebook? Please, could you correct it to make it sound natural or rewrite some parts if it's necessary? Family Bonding Run was successfully held. The competitors were divided into 5km and 8km groups. The weather was brilliant - it started to be clear after 8:00 am. A total of 285 players from China, Japan, South Korea, Malaysia, Australia and Turkey came to the event as scheduled. They did not get cold feet by continuous rainy days as the weather itself is a part of nature. The organiser encouraged the children to commune with nature on the premise of ensuring their safety, to face weather changes together and to discuss how to prepare competition equipment, supply and to keep warm.

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The Family Bonding Run was a big success!

The weather was brilliant - it cleared up after 8:00 am. A total of 285 players from China, Japan, South Korea, Malaysia, Australia and Turkey came to the event, divided into 5km and 8km groups. They did not get cold feet by the continuous rainy days leading up to the event as weather itself is a part of nature. The organizer encouraged the children to experience and interact with nature on the premise of being prepared, learning safety, facing weather changes together and learning how to maintain competition equipment.

(let me know if any questions about the changes! :)

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