(A)The theatre

Now I know I love a the theatre.
It All began recently. Last week I went in to the Theatre Operetta for the spectacle show"The flying mouse". It is a comedy. I many laughed and enjoyed a good play and especially the beatiful clothes.
Now, I have bought buy a new tickets for next two spectacles.shows.
I am very glad that I went to opened a new place for me

Please correct these sentences

1. Don't hurry. Swallow water very carefully and slowly.
2. He has the dimples on his cheek when he is smiling.
3. Don't eat this mushroom, because it is false fake. Can I eat this one? No, there are a lot of worms.
4. The Earth rotates around it's its axis.
5. Ann's len dag in her eye. The len inflict Ann pain, but she coped with it.  (what is a len or a dag?)
6. Is there anything you can't resist doing? Yes, I can't resist sleeping when I am tired even if I am sitting in a movie.I even am sitting at the cinema.
7. Is it weird to you, that some people eat insects? Yes, it is weird? because insects are too small.
8. Do you think about color combination when you see diversity of colorful and motley clothes in the store? Yes, I spend a half of my life thinking how one thing could be suit to another. ( am not sure what you are trying to say in this sentance. 
9. If I even Even if I am not in the mood, I must be gentle with my infant.
10. She spent most of her disposable income for buying emerald earrings. new earring with emerald.

Mi presentación

¡Hola! Mi llamo Jackye.

Soy un escritor.
Me gustan los documentales.
Vivo en Waco, Texas.
Mi esposo se llama Todd. Tengo dos hijos. un muchacho y una muchacha.
Estoy aprendiendo español para hablar con l gente que habla español en torno a mí vida cotidiana.

Mi presentación
Hola mi nombre es Jackye.
Escribo.
Me gustan los documentales.
Yo vivo en Waco, Texas.
Mi esposo se llama Todd. Tengo dos hijos. un muchacho y una muchacha.
Estoy aprendiendo (Oprrran Dee End do) español para hablar con la gente que habla español en torno a mí.