Please correct these sentences

1. Don't hurry. Swallow the water very carefully and slowly.
2. You can see the dimples on his cheeks when he is smiling.
3. Don't eat this mushroom because it is poisonous. Can I eat this one? No, there are a lot of worms on it.
4. The Earth rotates around its axis.
5. Ann's lens dug into her eye. The lens inflicted pain on Ann but she coped with it.
6. Is there anything you can't resist doing? Yes, I can't resist sleeping when I am tired, even if I am sitting in the cinema.
7. Is it weird to you, that some people eat insects? Yes, it is weird, because insects are too small.
8. Do you think about the colour combination when you see the diversity of colorful and motley clothes in a store? Yes, I spend half of my life thinking how one thing could suit another.
9. Even if I am not in the mood I must be gentle with my infant.
10. She spent most of her disposable income on new earrings with emeralds.

Please correct these sentences

1. Don't hurry. Swallow water very carefully and slowly.
2. He has the dimples on his cheek when he is smiling.
3. Don't eat this mushroom, because it is false fake. Can I eat this one? No, there are a lot of worms.
4. The Earth rotates around it's its axis.
5. Ann's len dag in her eye. The len inflict Ann pain, but she coped with it.  (what is a len or a dag?)
6. Is there anything you can't resist doing? Yes, I can't resist sleeping when I am tired even if I am sitting in a movie.I even am sitting at the cinema.
7. Is it weird to you, that some people eat insects? Yes, it is weird? because insects are too small.
8. Do you think about color combination when you see diversity of colorful and motley clothes in the store? Yes, I spend a half of my life thinking how one thing could be suit to another. ( am not sure what you are trying to say in this sentance. 
9. If I even Even if I am not in the mood, I must be gentle with my infant.
10. She spent most of her disposable income for buying emerald earrings. new earring with emerald.