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I am in an intensive class during the summer, and we're using the textbook آموزش زبان فارسی, I hope that I can find some kind friends here. I major in Chinese Literature and History, and I am a graduate student in the United States, so I may say I know everything about Chinese and China in a not too humble way...but that's almost true :) I am willing to make some language exchange partners, as well as some interesting friends... my skype is: zuoting.wen I will post it here for a short time, so please add me if the Karma finds you and if you're interested....
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    HSK3 汉字 (66-70)

    演
    这是他们的最好表演了！

    这是他们最好的表演了！【You can always put the 的 right before the noun you are modifing】


    That was their best performance! / It also means, This is their best perfomance. ie: don't expect more. 

    感
    我对古史很感兴趣。  我对古代史很感兴趣。
    I am interested in ancient history. 

    Although it's fine to say 古史, because there was a significant movement among the Chinese historians in the 20th century, which is called 古史辨运动, in which they questioned and tried to rediscover the writing of ancient Chinese history. I'm also intererested in 古代史 btw. 

    又
    新加坡又热又潮湿。
    Singapore is hot and humid.

    新加坡这鬼地方真是又热又潮湿。

    Singapore this shitty place is really hot and humid...haha. I like Singapore, trust me...

    to make it more authentic, you have to curse a place with this kind of temperature LOL. 

    选
    在澳大利亚，每个人都得选。 在澳大利亚，每个人都得参与选举。or 每个人都得投票。
    It is mandatory for people to vote in Australia.

    都得+v+O: 每个人都得吃饭；每个人都得上大学。。。。

    or sometimes you can say it like a command, for example, 今天开会，每个人都得去。


    闻
    这是已经昨天的新闻。
    This is already yesterday's news.

    we can it 明日黄花 sometimes....

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    June 14, 2015
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    幸福是什么？

     

    许多人说有好多钱就是实在的幸福，【有好多钱--> 有很多钱】 【实在的幸福--> 实实在在的幸福】

    有的还相信有高级的教育，           【有的，you have to use "许多人说……，还有许多人说" or, "有人说……，也有人说……"，】

    工作或和善的爱人就是真真的幸福。  【if you want to use more than three short sentences, you should try：有人说有很多钱是一种实实在在的幸福，有人说能接受高等教育是一种幸福，还有人说能拥有一份好工作和一位和善的爱人是真正的幸福】

    所以大多数的人都为了得到以上的目标，努力工作，尽力学习，推广自己的社会关系，什么的。

     

    【大多数的人都在为实现以上的目标而尽量学习，努力工作，甚至推广自己的社会关系。】 【Note: there is no need for using "所以." try to use “而” to connect your sentences...Pay attention to the order, if you're listing several things...typically 学习，and then 工作...as for "推广社会关系," it's an exception, so we put it in the end, with a 甚至 in front of it】

    这些目标都好，但是我们还有别的情况会面对幸福。 【这些目标都很好】【但是我们也有获得幸福的其他机会】

     

    很不幸，很多人一点也不注意得到成功的途径。 【然而不幸的是，很多人根本就没有注意到成功的过程 [process]。】【You changed the topic!!!! you you started talking about 成功 instead of  幸福】

    其实，成功的途径比最后的目的更宝贵。【途径--> 过程，目的--> 结局/结果】

     

    我们只有一辈子，但是从未不享受生活中的每一分钟。 【我们只有一辈子，我们应该享受生活中的每一分钟。or 我们只有一辈子，没有理由不去[there is no reason not to]享受生活中的每一分钟】

    不管成败，我们一定会有胜利的时刻，虽然目的得到不了。 【无论人生的成败，生活中每时每刻都会有幸福的时刻。】

     

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    June 2, 2015
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    我每天的计划 !!! :((  我的日程(My Schedule)

    明天我会做很多事情 (It's right, but sounds better if you say, 明天我要做... 要equals to "plan to" in this case.)

    1-我有打电话给旅行社为我前往美国  (1. the main structure is: 打电话给旅行社, you have to delete the "有," because you don't want to have two verbs in a sentence:) or you can say, 我要打电话给旅行社。。为我前往美国，you can say, 为去美国的事情darbareye be amrika amadn? :)

    2- 我会学习法语一小时 (学法语一小时: study French an hour/学一个小时的法语：study an hour of French)

    3- 我需要练习我的中国一小时。 （练习中文一小时practice Chinese an hour/练习一个小时的中文practice an hour of Chinese）

    4- 我一定要听的第一个好故事。 (一定要听一个好故事)

    5- 晚上我必须写我的整个星期的计划  （晚上必须完成本周计划(the plan for this week)）

     

    【In this kind of schedule writing, you do not need to write "我要" "我会" in front of every entry....because it's all about planing...】

    哦，我很忙。:((  (哦！我太忙了。)

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    June 2, 2015
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