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我每天的计划 !!! :((
明天我会做很多事情
1-我要打电话给旅行社因为我将要前往美国
2- 我要学习法语一小时
3- 我要练习我的中文一小时。
4- 我一定要听一个好故事。
5- 晚上我必须写我的整个星期的计划
哦,我很忙。:((
我每天的计划 !!! :((
明天我会做很多事情 明天我会/要做很多事 = Tomorrow I may/will do many things. Better to say, 明天我有很多事情去做/辦 = Tomorrow, I have many things to do
1-我要有打电话给旅行社为我要前往美国 Here 要 = "have to". 有 = has, have is not enough because it is something you have to do and cannot avoid.
2- 我会学习法语一小时
3- 我須需要练习我的中文国一小时。 The best way to remember the difference between 須要 and 需要 is that the first one requires a verb after and the 2nd one requires a noun after. Unlike English which uses one word for everything about a race and its attributes. Chinese differentiates its country name and culture. Language is part of culture!
4- 我一定要听的第一个好故事。 第一 = number one, so it makes no sense either in English or in Chinese.
5- 晚上我必须写我的整个星期的计划 When you start having to use many 的, you can remove most of them. Even the 2nd one can be removed.
哦,我很忙。:((
我每天的计划 !!! :(( 我的日程(My Schedule)
明天我会做很多事情 (It's right, but sounds better if you say, 明天我要做... 要equals to "plan to" in this case.)
1-我有打电话给旅行社为我前往美国 (1. the main structure is: 打电话给旅行社, you have to delete the "有," because you don't want to have two verbs in a sentence:) or you can say, 我要打电话给旅行社。。为我前往美国,you can say, 为去美国的事情darbareye be amrika amadn? :)
2- 我会学习法语一小时 (学法语一小时: study French an hour/学一个小时的法语:study an hour of French)
3- 我需要练习我的中国一小时。 (练习中文一小时practice Chinese an hour/练习一个小时的中文practice an hour of Chinese)
4- 我一定要听的第一个好故事。 (一定要听一个好故事)
5- 晚上我必须写我的整个星期的计划 (晚上必须完成本周计划(the plan for this week))
【In this kind of schedule writing, you do not need to write "我要" "我会" in front of every entry....because it's all about planing...】
哦,我很忙。:(( (哦!我太忙了。)
我每天的计划 !!! :((
明天我会做很多事情
1-我要打电话给为我前往美国的旅行社
2- 我要学习法语一小时
3- 我需要练习我的中文一小时。
4- 我一定要听一个好故事。
5- 晚上我必须写我整个星期的计划
哦,我很忙。:((
我每天的计划 !!! :((
明天我会(要)做很多事情
1-我有(要)打电话给旅行社为我前往美国
2- 我会学习法语一小时
3- 我需要练习我的中国(中文)一小时。
4- 我一定要听的第一个好故事。
5- 晚上我必须写我的整个星期的计划
哦,我很忙。:((
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