I think that feminine and male are not equal

This idea can shift from one space to another space.But according to me feminines are a step back from male generally.They are vulnerable a little this is why they need protection by male.Males come ahead at all hard works.Example;military service.While men are working at their job ,ladies are making meal,looking afher their child and working.Ladies are disturbed by men sometimes,but one woman rarely disturb a man.This is a trubble case I think.As a result feminine and male must be equal!

I think that women and men are not equal

This idea changes from one scenario to another, but in my opinion, women are generally a step back from men.  They are more vulnerable and need to be protected by men.  Men also come ahead in physical labor, for example, military service.  While men are working at their jobs, women are cooking, looking after the children, and also working.  Women are often bothered by men, but women rarely bother men.  I think this is a problem and why women and men must be equal.

Phrases of today

I'm sitting in my living room.
I do exercise before breakfast. --> I exercise before breakfast.
I practice meditation every day.
I spend time with my friends most weekends.
I travel abroad once a year.
I'm learning English this term.

Thank you. :)
I need to improve a lot my writting.

Kankore

Kankore is one of a kind Japanese anime.There are several characters who are design after battle ship and cute girl.Because it is aimed for nerd boy which is called "otaku".Otaku are likely to love animation girl and battleship.Because otaku are timid and are not take care appearance such as hair style, clothes.So they are likely to be ignored by real girls.This is why they love animation girls.And many otaku love to build plastic-model kit.So battle ship is a typical model of plastic model.Otaku has been gathered to Akihabara,Tokyo.Akihabara is popular among otaku.But Akihabara is also famous as forign traveler's destination because there are alos a lot of duty free shop.Akihabara was famous only about so many electric shops gathered.As of now,The purpose that people go to Akihabara came to be diversified.

Kankore is a one of a kind Japanese anime.  There are several characters who are designed to look like battleships and cute girls because it is aimed at nerds or "otaku" in Japanese.  Otaku are more likely to love anime girls and battleships. Why? Because otaku are generally timid (or "shy") and do not take very good care of their appearance such as their hairstyles or clothing, they are usually ignored by girls in real life!  Also, many otaku love to build plastic models and battleships are a very common model to build.  Akihabara, Tokyo is a popular place for Otaku to gather.  It is also a favorite travel destination for foreigners because there are lots of duty free shops.  Before, Akihabara was only known for its electric shops.  Now, there are many more reasons why people would visit Akihabara.

I was treated unfairly (writing level B1-intermediate)

When I was in third course at the university four years ago, I needed to pass an very important exam but I failed. The test wasn't really a current exam if not a project of a building being that I am an architetture student. My teacher said me the quality of proyect wasn't so good and if I had worked for more hours, I could have passed the exam easily.

Four years ago, when I was in my third year at the university, I needed to pass a very important exam. But I failed. [The test wasn't really a current exam if not a project of a building being that I am an architetture student. "yo no comprende"] My teacher told me that the quality of the project wasn't very good, and if I had worked on it longer, I could have passed the exam easily.

First, I felt very angry because I spent a lot of time working hard on my project and it was not fair. While as I made my project, I slept only four hours every day for two weeks and I didn't also go out with my friends. I was concentrated on my work so I felt sad too when the teacher gave me the qualification. Nowadays, I believe not only was it a amazing and original project but also was explaining very well. But the most important thing was I needed to pass this exam due to if I failed, I wouldn't get my student grant next year.

At first, I was very angry because I DID spend a lot of time and worked very hard on my project. It was not fair. I slept only 4 hours every day for 2 weeks, and I did not go out with my friends.  I concentrated on my work, so I was really sad when the teacher gave me that evaluation.  Not only do I believe that it was an amazing and original project, but that it was also very well explained.  But the most important thing was that I needed to pass!  If I failed, I would not get my student grant next year.

Therefore, I decided to talk with my teacher and explained him how I was feeling about this. I told him that if I didn't approve this subject, I couldn't study at the university next year as a consequence to lose my student grant.

Therefore, I decided to talk with my teacher and explain to him how I felt about my grade.  I told him that if I didn't pass this subject, I wouldn't be able to study at the university next year because I would lose my student grant.

Finally, after a long conversation, he passed me because he thought I was a good student and he gave me arguments such as I arrived to classroom the first and was always interested in progress in his subject. So, I had a five points!

Finally, after a long conversation, he eventually passed me because he thought I was a good student.  He told me that I always arrived to class first and always showed interest in making progress in his class.  So, I got my five points!

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