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Hello! I am from Taiwan ( the Republic of China ) 25 years old I used to be a airport staff at EVA Airways But now, I want to back to campuses and being a student again. So my present target is ...... pass the IELTS test !! I'm looking for an english exchanger So if you keen on improving Chinese skills or lacking the companion to practice some practical words in Chinese Hi Hi ( waving hands ) I am a native speaker~~~ Just don't hesitate to contact me :)
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    Pie charts and line graph TOPIC:: The chars below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. ESSAY:: The four pie charts show the percentage of food budget that average family would spend on restaurant meal or home cooking in different years, while the line graph compares the number of meals that people ate in fast-food restaurants or sit-down restaurants during the 1970 to 2000. Generally, we can see that the average budget for eating out in restaurants were gradually increasing from 1970 to 2000. Increasing 5% in the first decade, the proportion of restaurant meals’ budget grew exponentially to 35% in 1990. The decreasing trend that people spared food budget in home cooking was noticeable, with accounting for half of the proportion in total food budget in 2000. From the other line graph we can see that the number of meals in both types of restaurant were continually rising during the period. Having the same meal number as fast-food restaurants at 20 in 1970, meal number in sit-down restaurant climbed to 35 which was surpassing that in fast-foods’ in 1980. However, meal number in fast-food restaurants outnumbered those in sit-down restaurants within the decade between 1980-1990, and it happened a four fold soaring to 83 in 2000. In conclusion, more people preferred to spend their food budget in some outside restaurants but they chose to eat fast foods rather than meals taking time to enjoy.
    June 9, 2015
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    我的汉语

    我在七月的时候去北京。

    我以前就想去北京因为我想进步我的汉语。现在，我觉得我需要进步我的文法，因为我会说很多汉语、会用很多词，但是有时候我不会造成句子。

    除此之外，我也觉得我需要听更多的‘北京话‘。我听到的‘北京话’ 很奇怪， 很常 听到 有‘儿’。所以，我每天会听北京的新闻和北京的博客。

    这个月我也開始自己学德语；我有很多时间，因为我已经完成了我的考试。我很喜欢学语言；）。

    我很高兴去北京，我以前没去过中国。

    我去北京跟我的妈妈 我妈妈跟我一起来北京，我们去看长城，天安门广场，天坛 （所有的旅游景点）。我觉得北京的历史和北京的文化都很有意思。我们住在一个离胡同很近的饭店很近胡同。我会骑车去也会跟住在胡同里的人聊天。如果你住在北京，请告诉我你会告诉我去哪里？谢谢


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    June 8, 2015
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    Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. TOPIC:: Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree ? What other measures do you think might be effective ? ESSAY:: It is true that many social problems such as traffic congestion and air pollution are caused from cars and motorcycles. Some people consider that the best solution is increasing the price of petrol, but I firmly disagree with this opinion. In this essay, I will provide the reasons and provide suggestions that I think is more suitable. First, people would not deduce the number of journey that they travel everyday by seeing the gasoline price no matter it is high or low. As a result of necessary in vehicles usage, it is important to boost the advantages of electric cars which is relatively eco-friendly. This kind of cars cannot only relieve the problems of air pollution or noise pollution in the society but also has the benefit of helping our earth to save the limited resources. By the cooperation between car manufactures and national authorities, the positive influence from electric cars could be wildly popularized in the world. Second, it is important to encourage citizens to take public transport. The expenses of bus or other transports are normally less than the expenditures of car’s petrol. Moreover, some of the transports don’t even use gasoline to generate energy, so the fluctuation of gasoline price would not affect the operation of it directly. Furthermore, it is helpful to relieve the problem of traffic congestion which is very common in many countries. Centrally controlled by technology, these public transports are more punctual and regular so that people can easily manage their time. In conclusion, rising the price of gasoline is not the best way whereas I believe popularizing the electric cars and encouraging people to utilize public transports are more effective to tackle the traffic and pollution problems.
    June 8, 2015
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    Ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy TOPIC:: The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. ESSAY:: The graphs show the variation of the population from different ages in two countries in 2000 and the projection of year 2050. Generally in 2000, the population number in 15 to 59 years old was a large group in population structure of both countries and it was more significant in Italy, with 61.6% in the proportion of population. Yemen was the country full of young and strong citizen. Accounting for half of the overall population, youngsters that under 14 years old were the biggest group in Yemen. Conversely, people older 60 years old in Yemen was the smallest age group with merely 3.6% in proportion, but those in Italy stood at 24.1%. The projection charts for tow countries in 2050 indicate that both Yemen and Italy are mainly composed by people aging from 15 to 59 years old, with the former account for 57.3% and the later 46.2%. The number of population on senior citizens almost doubles those in the past. In contrast, there’s a decrease in the same group in Yemen with standing at 37%. To sum up, the percentage of the elderly people over 60 years old in both countries will much more than that in 2000.
    June 4, 2015
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    SPORTS FACILITIES AND HEALTH TOPIC:: Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Other, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. ESSAY:: The topic of constructing the sport facilities can improve the problems of low public health standard are the controversial issue in the society. Some people believe it is the best solution to influence citizens’s life and then encourage them to exercise more, while the others think there are some better ways to tackle the problems. In this essay, I will explore both views and conclude with my own opinion. It is common to see many community-based buildings are constructed for people to do exercise in our society. Every citizens are entitled to access these kind of sport centers and use the various software or hardware equipment with relatively cheaper price, comparing to the private operated gyms. At the same time, little restriction in the place could somehow inspire users to try and experience different sports activities that they barely can reach to even though the users are amateurs or beginners. However, building these construction normally cost huge amount of money. Instead of establishing the sport centers in communities, governments could place some simple exercise equipment in every district’s park which is not so pricy. Besides, children can develop a positive attitude toward sport activity at early stage by the result of enjoyment from playing in the park. In addition, the regarding of sports as an important affairs in public is crucial to the society. Media could broadcast more international or local sports news or games to the public to boost and motivate the perspective of exercise. In conclusion, while others argue whether sports facilities could increase the level of public health or not, I believe that there are some countermeasures apart from sports should be adopted at the same time of pursuing healthier life.
    June 4, 2015
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    我骑我的自行车

    我一边骑我的自行车一边看到很多事。有一条河在我的城市中，这条河叫Mississippi River。这条河是很有名。沿河有很多名胜古迹和估计（estimate?）美景。这些地方中Mill City Ruins是這其中最有名的。很多人喜欢参观拍照。有多树和花朵/花。天天每一天都有很多人沿河跑步或者走路。晚上，我能在河上看城市的灯。城市的灯漂亮地烛照亮著遗址。情侣鹦鹉蜂拥前去（遗址）听河赏月。

    While I ride my bike I see many things. There is a river through the middle of my city. It is called the Mississippi River. It is very famous. Along the river are many historic sites and scenic places. Mill City Ruins is one of the most famous of these places. Many people like to visit and take pictures. There are a lot of trees and flowers. Every day many people walk or run along the river. At night I can see the city lights on the river. The city lights beautifully illuminate the ruins.Lovebirds flock to the ruins to listen to the river and admire the moon.

     

    *Lovebirds means couples, right ? 

      So you can say 情侶 is fine, but if you really want to express they are very intimately then you can plus

      a adjective “熱戀中的” <-- It means in love ~

    *鹦鹉 is kinds of birds, so we were't use that.

     

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    June 2, 2015
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    In general, people are living longer now than before. Discuss the causes of the recent increase Topic :: Discuss the causes of the recent increase in life expectancy. Use specific reasons and detail to develop you're essay. With the development of medical technology and knowledge, people nowadays can live much longer than they used to. There are various reasons why the people's lifespan has prolonged and two of which will be listed below. Firstly, as the process of technology has contributed to the medical equipment and treatment in recent years, the medical standard in the society has leveled up gradually. Many diseases are no longer incurable. Diagnosed at earlier stage, some of terminal diseases like cancer are predictable under doctor's control. Moreover, current technology allows human beings' organs to be transformed from one body to another,which considerably decreasing the mortality of human beings. Secondly, it is true that the affairs related to elderly people are intensively taken into account by the government and the society facing the soaring rate of senior citizens' population. The welfare formulated by the authorities provides practical fundings to elderly people, such as sickness pay or annual subsidy, which financially assisting them a lot. In addition, many organizations and individuals in the society give a boost to the establishments of nursing homes. The proliferation of it in the society gives a big aid of taking care of senior citizens. The sound and suitable facilities and qualified staffers with medical knowhow in the nursing home help elders to live a life easierly in this well-prepared place. In conclusion, it is clear to see life expectancy is longer then the past. Advances in medication, officially welfare in funding and locally nursing houses are the explanations for this trend.
    June 2, 2015
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    My friend said that this Mandarin is terrible. Can someone please help me translate it to English?

    我希望學習I hope to learn讓我的更符合業界及市場需求的設計技能，除此之外，還有活動檔期的安排與企劃、DM的製作及派送，甚至是even to/about開設分店的前置prior準備（作業），我希望這些經驗對未來能could學習上更有幫助。

     

    Is that what u mean ? I'm not sure what the thesis about orginally ..... 

     

     

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    May 30, 2015
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    钙和你的身体

    English: http://lang-8.com/1134248/journals/17678144725753759128337803789347586197
    每个人在他们的生活中都需要钙。但是，每个人对於鈣的需求量取决于他们的年龄。人们在青少年时期以及二十年代中期需要最多钙，因為在这个期间骨头会变得很堅硬坚强（this is a little bit change, you can change to 骨头会增长并且变硬）。他们在人们的身体内的“骨头银行”做累积积灰，已准备成人期。如果你的饮食有低缺乏钙，你的身体会从你的“骨头银行（the santance is imcomplete, "your body would lent from the skeleton bank and ???） 。“它需要钙来保持你的身体的健康运转。当你的身体从你的”骨头银行“拿出钙时却不被取代，你的骨头也许会变得脆弱。除了起/有 保持骨骼的健康的作用外，钙对控制血压以及（给你的身体 <--Don't need to mention ''it is from your body'' again ）保持（健康的<-- the former verb "maintain" also implys: keep in the healthy way, so the adjective 健康的 is redundant in here）体重非常重要。你必须吃低脂肪，高含钙的食物。小孩增加他们的每天的钙摄取量很重要，以防止长期问题。 （better in 为了防止长期问题，增加小孩他们的每天的钙摄取量很重要。）

    你需要吃多少钙？
    美国奶业协会建议大家所有人每天吃至少三份如奶和酸奶的高含钙的食物。吃恰当的分量以及来自所有食物类的恰当份数量会援助你平衡饮食（better conclude in 均衡飲食），也能帮助你达到你每天的钙需求量。

    增加钙的方法
    -维他命D可以/能夠促进身体吸收钙的能力。维他命D的一些来源包括肥鱼和补充维他命D的奶？。你的身体通过晒太阳能够自己产生钙。产生量取决于年龄，肤色，一年中的什么时候，以及你住在哪。
    -在没一顿餐和小餐吃富含钙的食物。
    -没一顿餐要喝奶。
    -做承担重量的运动 （走步）
    -限制钠和咖啡因。太多的钠和咖啡因可能会导致骨头丢失。

    食物标签
    看食物标签来知道食物里有多少钙。看钙的每日需求量的百分数。在那个数目候加一个0来指引导毫克。比方说：如果一个食物标签显示着某个食物有每日钙需求量的百分之三十的部分，它就有300毫克钙。

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    May 30, 2015
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    been a while

    我很久都没有个更新这个记本了。。。

     

    if you mean 

    1.had been a while

    我已经很久都没有更新这个笔记本（or记事簿）了 （簡體中文）

    我已經很久都沒有更新這個筆記本（or記事簿）了（繁體中文）

     

    2.has been a while

    我很久都没有更新这个笔记本（or记事簿）了（簡體）

    我很久都沒有更新這個筆記本（or記事簿）了（繁體）

     

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    May 30, 2015
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