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Pie charts and line graph TOPIC:: The chars below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. ESSAY:: The four pie charts show the percentage of food budget that average family would spend on restaurant meal or home cooking in different years, while the line graph compares the number of meals that people ate in fast-food restaurants or sit-down restaurants during the 1970 to 2000. Generally, we can see that the average budget for eating out in restaurants were gradually increasing from 1970 to 2000. Increasing 5% in the first decade, the proportion of restaurant meals’ budget grew exponentially to 35% in 1990. The decreasing trend that people spared food budget in home cooking was noticeable, with accounting for half of the proportion in total food budget in 2000. From the other line graph we can see that the number of meals in both types of restaurant were continually rising during the period. Having the same meal number as fast-food restaurants at 20 in 1970, meal number in sit-down restaurant climbed to 35 which was surpassing that in fast-foods’ in 1980. However, meal number in fast-food restaurants outnumbered those in sit-down restaurants within the decade between 1980-1990, and it happened a four fold soaring to 83 in 2000. In conclusion, more people preferred to spend their food budget in some outside restaurants but they chose to eat fast foods rather than meals taking time to enjoy.

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Pie charts and line graph

TOPIC::
The chars below show the percentage of their food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.


ESSAY::
The four pie charts show the percentage of food budget [for] [a typical][household][going towards] restaurant [versus] home cook[ed] meals [across four decades][.] [T]he line graph [charts] the number of meals [per year] that [individuals] ate in fast-food restaurants [and] sit-down restaurants during the [same four decades, spanning] 1970 to 2000.

Generally, we can see that the average budget for eating out in restaurants [] gradually increas[ed] from 1970 to 2000. Increasing 5% in the first decade, the proportion of restaurant meals’ budget grew exponentially to 35% in 1990. The decreasing trend that people spared food budget in home cooking was noticeable, [] accounting for half of the [] total food budget in 2000.

From the [] line graph[,] [] the number of meals in both types of restaurant [] continually [rose] during the [surveyed time] period. [In 1970, individuals reported having the same number of fast-food and sit-down restaraunt meals. Consistent with the pie charts, the line graph shows an increase in both fast food and sit down meals. The line graph provides additional information in that the growth of restaurant meals is mainly attributed to fast food. By 1990, the number of fast food meals surpasses the number of sit down meals, and by 2000, the number of fast food meals double those at sit down restaurants.]

 
In conclusion, the [four pie charts and the line graph show an increase in meals consumed at restaurants, particularly fast food, over the span of four decades.]

 

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