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Hi, I'm Tingyu, from Taiwan. I'm a senior student. I hope to find a Chinese-English language exchange for promoting my writing skill and speaking ability. If you're learning Chinese and want to know more about our culture, let's make a friend!
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  • Corrected

    觀鳥在公園觀鳥(in Hong kong, they used "觀鳥"; in Taiwan, we used "賞鳥")

    我的新的愛後好(or use "嗜好")是觀鳥。
    我沒有雙筒望遠鏡，但是我有太很好的相機。
    昨天，我去公園了。，我觀看到了一個隻鳥叫 American robin 的鳥。 

    (真的)很有趣！ 我不久之後我想再去一次！ (or 不久之後，我想再去一次！)

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    June 3, 2015
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    每個人在變

    (在)第一天開學開學的第一天，每個人在單獨都是孤獨的，沒有人有朋友，對呢吧？終於，找到了朋友們。然後突然，每個人都變了，不再是以前的自我。朋友們和你不一樣再也也不再一樣。再次單獨獨自一人。直到找到別的人有類似的利益為你與你有類似興趣的朋友。，但是，我們卻天天在變。怎麽可以如何擁有永遠的好朋友們？
    我最近我逐漸(or use "開始")認識了解到我前時候的朋友們經常跟我不一樣與以前的朋友們不同了。我變了，我再一次，單獨我孤零一人("孤零" is the same as "獨自", "孤獨", "孤單") 。

    如果看不懂：On the first day of school, everyone is alone. No one has friends, right? Eventually, finding friends. Suddenly, everyone changes, not their previous selves. [Your] friends and you aren't like each other anymore. Again by yourself. Until finding friends with similar interests as you, but everyday we are changing. How can [we] have friends that last forever?
    A recently came to realize my friends from before and I now aren't alike. I changed, again, I'm alone.

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    May 29, 2015
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  • Corrected

    "聰明" 的目標

    一個"聰明"的目標有五個方面要件 (Use"要件" would be more specific to "components"):

    第一: "特定" -- 目標不能太廣, 需要訂下一個很清楚的原應具備明確性或清楚的效果.
    第二: "能測"可預見 would be better -- 目標需要能測有可預見性, 才知道有沒有得達到
    第三: "實際"可達成 -- 如果不實際就不算目標, 算夢想. 如果目標不實際，那就只是個夢想而已
    第四: "貼題" -- 一個沒貼題的目標沒有什麼好處. (refer to the correction of the first one)
    第五: "時限" -- 世界上最公平的事實唯一不變的真理就是每個人一天都只有24小時. 目標需要一個期限, 才有緊迫感.
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    A "SMART" goal has five components:
    1: "Specific" -- a goal cannot be too broad. It must be clearly stated or have a clearly defined outcome.
    2: "Measurable" -- progress towards a goal must be measurable to know if progress or the goal is achieved
    3. "Achievable" -- the goal should be realistic, or otherwise it's just a dream
    4. "Relevant" -- goals should pursue something of worth
    5. "Time-bound" -- The only universal truth is that everyone has only 24 hours in a day. A goal must have a time-limit to instill a sense of urgency

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    May 28, 2015
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