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- Sentences in Russian 1. Я пошла в университет штата Флорида. Я узнал криминология. 2. Я работаю в компании убежище дом. Я - кризис советник. 3. Я хочу быть ____. 4. Что ты делаешь день? 5. Как тебе день? 6. Я скучаю по тебе. 7. Ты хочешь FaceTime сейчас? 8. Я сейчас в работе. 9. Я уходите работу. 10. Я сейчас в моя подруга дом. 11. Я сейчас в спать.January 22, 2016110
How it's going my day?
Well, It was maybe 2 week ago, I arrived in Kiev. Weather was really cool, very beautiful. My friend met me in railway station, I was really happy, because we didn't meet long time. I like Kiev, I like its energy and power, I'm felling it every time when I in Kiev. After meet I have little important deal. Every one, I like quality tea, and my neighbour with I live brake my cup for tea.Unsure what you mean't here, therefore unable to correct. Yea, it's terrible! But he give me some money for broken cup. important deal was I would chose some cup that I like. I and my friend walked a lot of time for Ashan supermarket, but when we search cup I chosen it very speed. I chosen glass cup, it's real better cup than I have early, because I have a blue ceramic cup, and in glass cup I could see real colour my tea. It's better for me. In short I was feeling good. Yep, by the way after buying, we went to friends apartment in Kiev, we bought some salmon meat. And we cooked buckwheat with salmon meat, we ate it in balcony, glasses balcony at twenty floor. It was unbelievable, sunset was amazing. I am feeling good now, when I'm remembering this thing. In short, as far evening we play computer game and watch interesting movie! It was very good time that we had done.------
How is my day going? OR How my day is going.
Well, it was maybe two weeks go when I had arrived in Kiev. The weather was really cool and very beautiful, my friend had met me in the railway station, which made me really happy because it had been a long time since we had seen each other. I like Kiev, I like it's energy and power, it's something I feel every time I visit. The neighbor that I live with broke the cup I use for my tea, but fortunately he was nice enough to reimburse me with money for having broken my cup. So my friend and I went up to the Ashan supermarket to search for a cup and I found one very quickly. I had chosen a glass cup versus a ceramic, which now allowed me to see the color of my tea. After buying the cup, my friend and I went to another friend of ours apartment in Kiev. We bought some Salmon and we cooked buckwheat along with the meat. We ate our Salmon and buckwheat on the balcony of the twentieth floor, using our new glass cups. The sunset was unbelievably amazing! I feel good when I remember these moments. As for the rest of the evening, we played games on the computer and watched an interesting movie. It was a very good time that we had :)
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I tried to do my best to edit with what you had written. However, I struggled with some of the sentences as I wasn't sure your meaning. I would say to work on word order as well as making sure that you're spelling some words correct (i.e. neighbor). Overall, you were able to form a paragraph very well! just grammatical mistakes and some misunderstanding on my end as to what you're trying to communicate. I would suggest taking a look at the sentence I highlighted and try to re-write it in a way that is able to be understood as to what you're trying to convey.
Good job and keep up the learning! do not be discouraged :)
0 votedNovember 17, 20150- Вопросы и Ответы (Один) Q: Как тебя зовут? A: Меня зовут Erica. Q: Где ты живёшь? A: Я живу в Америка. Q: Ты учишься или Работаешь? A: Я учусь и Я Работаю. Q: Где ты учишься? A: Я учусь в Университете (Florida state university). Q: Ты студентка или аспирантка? A: Я студентка, не аспирантка. Q: Ты русская? A: нет, Я Американка не русская. Q: Ты американка? A: Да, Я АмериканкаNovember 17, 201583
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Hi, i would like to say about reason why i here. I want know english language wery well and write correctly. I study in university but there i have i little practice. I want find people who can help me with learning enlish language.
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Hi, I would like to say why I am here. I want to know English and be able to write it correctly. I am currently in college, but practice little. I would like to meet people who can help me learn English.
Use "I" instead of "i" because it is considered formal since you are speaking about yourself.
Use "would like" instead of "want" because saying "I want ___" can come across as rude in English, it makes it seem like a demand rather than a request.
Say "I am currently in college" or "I am a college student" instead of "I study in a University" because when English native speakers conversate with one another they would never phrase it that way. Often, we will refer to ourselves as "a college student" or say that "we go to college" rather than being "in" college. It may sound silly, but that is how we speak! ))
Say "I want to meet" rather than "I want to find" in English we do not usually use "find" in that context. For example "I want to meet more people" or "I want to meet you" is how we would talk about a person rather than "I want to find friends" or "I want to find you." I hope that makes sense! ))
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