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Hi, i would like to say about reason why i here. I want know english language wery well and write correctly. I study in university but there i have i little practice. I want find people who can help me with learning enlish language.
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Hi, I would like to say why I am here. I want to know English and be able to write it correctly. I am currently in college, but practice little. I would like to meet people who can help me learn English.
Use "I" instead of "i" because it is considered formal since you are speaking about yourself.
Use "would like" instead of "want" because saying "I want ___" can come across as rude in English, it makes it seem like a demand rather than a request.
Say "I am currently in college" or "I am a college student" instead of "I study in a University" because when English native speakers conversate with one another they would never phrase it that way. Often, we will refer to ourselves as "a college student" or say that "we go to college" rather than being "in" college. It may sound silly, but that is how we speak! ))
Say "I want to meet" rather than "I want to find" in English we do not usually use "find" in that context. For example "I want to meet more people" or "I want to meet you" is how we would talk about a person rather than "I want to find friends" or "I want to find you." I hope that makes sense! ))
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Hi, i would like to talk about the reasons why I am here. I want know English language very well and write correctly. I study in a university but there I don't have much practice. I want find people who can help me with learning enlish language.
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Hi, i would like to say the reasons why I am here. I want to know English wery well and to write correctly. I study in an university but there I don't have much practice . I want to find people who can help me with learning English language.
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