First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello, my name is Kathleen. I'm from China. My major is music. I 'm outgoing
and easygoing. I really want to learn English. I want to improve my English, so I want to find a pen pal.

开小差 should come out as something like, 'his/her mind wandered off', or 'zoned out'. E.g., The teacher asked him a question, but his mind had wandered off and he didn't notice.

My favorite singer : Stefanie Sun

My favorite singer :Stefanie Sun

Does anybody know <strike>her</strike> who she is? (<---this makes it clear that you don't mean 'know her' as a friend)

Stefanie Sun is <strike>a Singapore singer</strike> singer from Singapore, a very famous star in Asia<strike>n</strike>.
When I first heard her<strike> a </strike>amazing voice I was 14 years old. The first song I heard<strike> is</strike> was "Tian Hei Hei".She was playing the piano <strike>at the</strike> on MTV. Not very beautiful but so peaceful, I liked that moment.
I've heard all of her <strike>every</strike> albums. I like her voice so much and all her songs, even the ones not in the albums.
Right now, she is a beautiful woman. Even if she doesn't often release albums, I'll still love her.

Can someone correct me? Thanks

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self-introduction

This is my first time <strike>that i</strike> writing a composition here. I hope someone will correct the mistakes i make. Now, let me introduce myself so that you guys will know more about me. I am a clinical research associate <strike>work for</strike> at a medicine factory. We are going to start a new clinical trail in July. It’s about a kind of drug that comes from plants, and is for treating male infertility. We have finished investigating its efficacy and safety. It’s a project that is being done in cooperation with my firm and the Shanghai Institute of Andriatry in Renji Hospital. If you know someone who suffers from  male infertility, tell them that maybe I can help them. haha I am a warm person, and that's why I studied at a medical school over the past 4 years.
That's all I wanna say today. Happy Children's Day, everyone.

Remember to put a period directly after the end of each sentence, and also to capitalize the first letter of every new one.
Otherwise, good job! Keep it up

The Digital Age

Direactions: write a short essay entitled "The Digital Age", the outine given below:
1、如今数字化产品得到越来越广泛的使用(widely used)，例如……
2、数字化产品的使用对人们工作、学习和生活产生的影响(effects)。

With the development of techology, more and more digital products are used in our daily lives. If you walk along the street, you can see all kinds of ads for digital products. For example, cameras, mobile phones, computers, and so on. We've already arrived in the digital age.
<strike>The </strike>Digital products are widely used in our lives. In a company, every staff member uses a computer to do their work<strike>s</strike> because it makes their work<strike>s</strike> faster and more efficient. It's hard<strike>ly</strike> to imagine what a company would be like if all the computers <strike>are</strike> disappeared. We also often use the computer to search for information that we need. At the same time, computer's allow us to know what's going on in the news all over the world. Digital products enrich our lives. We can use <strike>the </strike>cameras to record our happy times, use <strike>the</strike> mobile phones to keep in contact with our family and friends, and use computers to broaden our horizons.
<strike>The</strike> Digital products have already become an indispensable part of our lives, and our lives will become even better with the further development of techology.

Shopping in Walmart

When I got off work yesterday afternoon, my boyfriend gave me a call. He asked me to wait at the bus station. Him and his friend would drive there to pick me up. First, we went to a small resturant serving Wuhan specialties because the three of us are all from Hubei province. After dinner, we headed over directly to Walmart. We walked around <strike>there</strike> and picked out <em>('pick out' is more colloquial than 'select')</em> the daily commodities we needed. At around 9:30, we drove back home. When we arrived home, it was 9:50. I felt so tired, I took a shower immediately, and then went to sleep.

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