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My favorite singer :Stefanie Sun My favorite singer :Stefanie Sun Does anybody know her ? Stefanie Sun is a Singapore singer, a very famous star in Asian. When I first heard her a amazing voice I was 14 years old.The first song I heard is "Tian Hei Hei".She was playing the piano at the MTV. Not very beauty but So peaceful, I like this moment. I hear her every albums,Like her voice so much and all her songs, even not in albums. At now,she is a beautiful woman. Even she doesn't often release albums,I still love her. Can someone correct me? Thanks

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My favorite singer :Stefanie Sun

My favorite singer :Stefanie Sun

Does anybody know her ?

Stefanie Sun is a Singapore singer, a very famous star in Asian.
When I first heard her amazing voice I was 14 years old.The first song I heard is "Tian Hei Hei".She was playing the piano at the MTV. Not very beautiful but So peaceful, I like this moment.
I hear all the albums of her,i Like her voice so much and all her songs, even the ones not in albums.
now,she is a beautiful woman. Even she doesn't often release albums,I still love her.

Can someone correct me? Thanks
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My favorite singer : Stefanie Sun

My favorite singer :Stefanie Sun

Does anybody know her who she is? (<---this makes it clear that you don't mean 'know her' as a friend)

Stefanie Sun is a Singapore singer singer from Singapore, a very famous star in Asian.
When I first heard her a amazing voice I was 14 years old. The first song I heard is was "Tian Hei Hei".She was playing the piano at the on MTV. Not very beautiful but so peaceful, I liked that moment.
I've heard all of her every albums. I like her voice so much and all her songs, even the ones not in the albums.
Right now, she is a beautiful woman. Even if she doesn't often release albums, I'll still love her.

Can someone correct me? Thanks

Good job!
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我也很喜欢她！《天黑黑》曾经感动了我好多次！
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i'm not sure of my corrections , i hope some teacher can tell us the right
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