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I've been working on the English language for 4 years, typically with speaking and listening skills. I majored in music at college, and I am a music addict for sure. I also have some traveling experiences domestically and internationally.
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    Thanking Coworkers

    谢谢我的同事们（coworkers are plural，adding a my “我的” to limit whose colleagues they are）


    我本来希望亲手写这封信，但我还是想保持匿名。 （you mean “ I was able to hand write the letter，but still keep it anonymous anyway”，I hope I didn't misunderstand it，so here comes “还是”，which means “still wanna”，to make it clear）
    你一直在努力工作......哦，非常辛苦。确实是，非常的努力 （there isn't a certain translation to 'oh' in Chinese I suppose, so in most of the time, we would say " sure it is " 确实是/是的，in order to emphasize what you said in the last sentence）
    这是一个累人的工作量。 这个工作量十分累人（the noun is  “workload”，you'd better put it in the first place and add an adj to describe it）
    有点谢谢你卡似乎并不足够，但这里希望这照亮你的一天一点点。

    一张小小的感谢卡并不足以表达我的感激之情，但我希望这能让你拥有明媚的一天。（”a little thank you card“ is a noun，so it's likely to be a “名词词性” in Chinese，which is number+adj+n，一张小小的卡片. "brightens your day" is pretty superficial if you translate it in a direct way, so I used "明媚“，which is a better version of ”明亮“. you can use “明媚” to describe the weather or your mood, but "明亮“ only means clear and bright physically）


    谢谢你所有做的电脑工作，你做的。（do=做）
    感谢您帮助让学校看起来干净和美丽。（”帮助“ is more active，when we want to define the consequences，we usually don't use it）
    感谢您帮助保持维护学校安全。（when we say “keep it clean”，it usually refers to something doable，but when we want to “keep it safe”，it usually takes a lot more effort，so I changed it to "维护“，keep it and protect it）
    一张小小的感谢卡并不足以表达我的感激之情，但我希望这能让你拥有明媚的一天。


    I would have liked to hand write this letter, but I wanted to remain anonymous.
    You have been working hard…oh so very hard.
    It has been an exhausting workload.
    A little thank you card doesn’t seem sufficient, but here’s hoping this brightens your day a little.

    Thank you for all the computer work you do.
    Thank you for helping the school look clean and beautiful.
    Thank you for helping to keep the school safe.
    A little thank you card doesn’t seem sufficient, but here’s hoping this brightens your day a little.



    Btw, could you please do me a favor and correct my IELTS essay in return, thanks!




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    May 30, 2019
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    an IELTS essay I wrote（I want to know the errors I‘ve made，thank you so much for help！） QUESTION: Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject that they are best at or that they find the most interesting. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. People have different opinions on the subjects undertaken in the recent years. Either says it is more important for pupils to work well on their well-performed, favorable and preferable subjects or appear in every single one of them possible. Generally speaking, every course has its own purpose to showcase something to the youngsters, including literature, history, mathematics, physics, politics, arts, chemistry and physical exercises, which aim to build up the knowledge of nature, accelerate the curiosity, enrich a sense of the taste and broaden their horizon. Meanwhile, most of the pupils at a young age do not treat discipline as something serious, they even have no clue about what those curriculums are aiming for and what they do love to do. On the other hand, some children do know what they’re talented at and tend to do what they’re meant to do. The majority of them are quite intelligent and over-perform most of the folks at school, who are quite aware of the advantages and weakness they have. The motivation is accelerating, and children would have much more time to focus on their interests rather than anything else. But the most concerned part should also be kept in mind, only a few amount of pupils know what they exactly fancy and able to learn it well in the near future. Overall thinking, I insist that youngsters should focus on each lesson in their school time, and try to pick up something favorable when they get older.
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    The Song of Bruce Lee Bruce Lee(李小龍） When life is a hard game Don‘t you blame It's your chance to Arise your aim Let your spirit be brave Always fight to hold your name No matter how bad or rough You never surrender All the warriors in this world Join the passion of this master of soul From the chinese hills and shore We still listen to bruce lee battle call When life is a hard game Dont you blame It's your chance to Arise your aim Let your spirit be brave Always fight to hold your name No matter how bad or rough You never surrender All the warriors in this world Join the passion of this master of soul From the chinese hills and shore We still listen to Bruce Lee battle call All the warriors in this world Join the passion of this master of soul From the chinese hills and shore We still listen to bruce lee battle call
    June 17, 2015
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    浪费时间

    最近个好心情很好。我通过了我的考试，可以休息一下了。除了休息以之外，每天我还我每天都在学习准备下月的考试。但是我很懒惰，浪费很多时间上网。我希望人们不要浪费他们的时间。时间很少有限。我们很快就逝世终将逝去。可能或许今天或者明天。可能亦或许70年以后来。所以人们必须急忙住珍惜时光。你不是浪费掉了很多时间吗?从现在开始我决定随时作什么想做的事。我不喜欢浪费时间。要是我在排队，我要可以在手机上看看一本书或者新闻在手机。如果我要去不管到哪里，我都可以一边走路一边听音乐或阅览播客。一个月两次我坐公交车回家乡我每个月两次坐公交车回家。在我坐公共汽车（bus？这里一般指的是大巴或者巴士，一般不是公交车）的时候，我可以读一本书或者做点作业。别的人只看窗外或者只坐。我们去4小时车里大多数的人只是坐着或者望向窗外，可惜了这四个小时的大好时光！

    Yellow：Cancel

    Blue：Add

    Green：Doubt

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    June 14, 2015
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    我的语言的伙伴

    上周我开始了一个新的语言交换。 我在2011年我在阿根廷，西班牙和秘鲁学习了西班牙语。然而在离开阿根廷以后我没有学习西班牙语太多怎么学习西班牙语。所以我的西班牙语水平变成差了。不巧的是我的语言伙伴今天也没有空。她可能星期二她可能有空。

    Yellow mean cancel

    Green mean add

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    June 14, 2015
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    June 10, 2015
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    Go To The Gym I want to go to the gym these days. I want to be thinner and healthier. But I haven't had enough courage to continue and do well. I usually run outside at night and I think if I was alone and I should behave myself. But if there are some people running with me and I would be more relax and get a lot of energy.
    June 10, 2015
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