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Thanking Coworkers (谢谢同事) 我本来希望亲手写这封信,但我想保持匿名。 你一直在努力工作......哦,非常辛苦。 这是一个累人的工作量。 有点谢谢你卡似乎并不足够,但这里希望这照亮你的一天一点点。 谢谢你所有的电脑工作,你做的。 感谢您帮助学校看起来干净和美丽。 感谢您帮助保持学校安全。 有点谢谢你卡似乎并不足够,但这里希望这照亮你的一天一点点。 I would have liked to hand write this letter, but I wanted to remain anonymous. You have been working hard…oh so very hard. It has been an exhausting workload. A little thank you card doesn’t seem sufficient, but here’s hoping this brightens your day a little. Thank you for all the computer work you do. Thank you for helping the school look clean and beautiful. Thank you for helping to keep the school safe. A little thank you card doesn’t seem sufficient, but here’s hoping this brightens your day a little.

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Thanking Coworkers (谢谢同事)

我本来希望亲手写这封信,但我想保持匿名。
你一直在努力工作......哦,非常辛苦。
这是一个累人的工作量。

有点谢谢你卡似乎并不足够,
这张小小的感谢卡似乎并不足够表达我对你的感激,

但这里希望这照亮你的一天一点点。
但这里希望这能照亮你的一天。

谢谢你所有的电脑工作,你做的。
谢谢你做的所有的电脑工作,。

感谢您帮助学校看起来干净和美丽。
感谢您让我们的学校看起来干净和美丽。

感谢您帮助保持学校安全。
感谢您确保学校的安全。

有点谢谢你卡似乎并不足够,
这张小小的感谢卡似乎并不足够表达我对你的感激,

但我希望这照亮你的一天。

I would have liked to hand write this letter, but I wanted to remain anonymous.
You have been working hard…oh so very hard.
It has been an exhausting workload.
A little thank you card doesn’t seem sufficient, but here’s hoping this brightens your day a little.

Thank you for all the computer work you do.
Thank you for helping the school look clean and beautiful.
Thank you for helping to keep the school safe.
A little thank you card doesn’t seem sufficient, but here’s hoping this brightens your day a little.

 写得很好,都是一些小的错误。

我现在在italki 教中文,如果你在学中文时遇到问题,可以问我哦 :D 
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Thanking Coworkers (谢谢同事)

我本来希望亲手写这封信,但我想保持匿名。
你一直在努力工作......哦,非常努力。
这是一个工作量很大的职位。
这张卡并不能完全表达我的感谢,但希望这给你的生活带来一点点美丽的亮光。

谢谢你所有的电脑处理工作。
感谢您让学校看起来更干净更美丽。
感谢您维护学校的安全。
这张卡并不能完全表达我的感谢,但希望这给你的生活带来一点点美丽的亮光。

:-)
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我想写一封匿名信。
你一直都在努力工作,肯定感到非常辛苦。
每天的工作量很大。 这张卡片不足以表达我的感激之情,但是我希望你每天都是明朗快乐的。


感谢你在电脑方面给我提供的帮助。
感谢您,让学校保持干净和美丽。
感谢您帮助维护学校安全。这张卡片不足以表达我的感激之情,但是我希望你每天都是明朗快乐的。

I would have liked to hand write this letter, but I wanted to remain anonymous.
You have been working hard…oh so very hard.
It has been an exhausting workload.
A little thank you card doesn’t seem sufficient, but here’s hoping this brightens your day a little.

Thank you for all the computer work you do.
Thank you for helping the school look clean and beautiful.
Thank you for helping to keep the school safe.
A little thank you card doesn’t seem sufficient, but here’s hoping this brightens your day a little.
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我本来希望想亲手写这封信,但我想保持匿名。
你一直在努力工作......哦嗯,非常辛苦。
这是一个累人的工作量。
这是一个让人筋疲力尽的工作。
有点谢谢你卡似乎并不足够,但这里希望这照亮你的一天一点点。
些这张卡片并不足以感谢你,但是我希望你每天都能开心。

谢谢你所有的电脑工作,你做的。
感谢您所做的工作,
感谢您帮助让学校看起来干净和美丽。
感谢您帮助使学校更安全。
有点谢谢你卡似乎并不足够,但这里希望这照亮你的一天一点点。
些这张卡片并不足以感谢你,但是我希望你每天都能开心。

I would have liked to hand write this letter, but I wanted to remain anonymous.
You have been working hard…oh so very hard.
It has been an exhausting workload.
A little thank you card doesn’t seem sufficient, but here’s hoping this brightens your day a little.

Thank you for all the computer work you do.
Thank you for helping the school look clean and beautiful.
Thank you for helping to keep the school safe.
A little thank you card doesn’t seem sufficient, but here’s hoping this brightens your day a little.
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Thanking Coworkers

谢谢我的同事们(coworkers are plural,adding a my “我的” to limit whose colleagues they are)


我本来希望亲手写这封信,但我还是想保持匿名。 (you mean “ I was able to hand write the letter,but still keep it anonymous anyway”,I hope I didn't misunderstand it,so here comes “还是”,which means “still wanna”,to make it clear)
你一直在努力工作......哦,非常辛苦。确实是,非常的努力 (there isn't a certain translation to 'oh' in Chinese I suppose, so in most of the time, we would say " sure it is " 确实是/是的,in order to emphasize what you said in the last sentence)
这是一个累人的工作量。 这个工作量十分累人(the noun is  “workload”,you'd better put it in the first place and add an adj to describe it)
有点谢谢你卡似乎并不足够,但这里希望这照亮你的一天一点点。

一张小小的感谢卡并不足以表达我的感激之情,但我希望这能让你拥有明媚的一天。(”a little thank you card“ is a noun,so it's likely to be a “名词词性” in Chinese,which is number+adj+n,一张小小的卡片. "brightens your day" is pretty superficial if you translate it in a direct way, so I used "明媚“,which is a better version of ”明亮“. you can use “明媚” to describe the weather or your mood, but "明亮“ only means clear and bright physically)


谢谢你所有做的电脑工作,你做的。(do=做)
感谢您帮助让学校看起来干净和美丽。(”帮助“ is more active,when we want to define the consequences,we usually don't use it)
感谢您帮助保持维护学校安全。(when we say “keep it clean”,it usually refers to something doable,but when we want to “keep it safe”,it usually takes a lot more effort,so I changed it to "维护“,keep it and protect it)

一张小小的感谢卡并不足以表达我的感激之情,但我希望这能让你拥有明媚的一天。


I would have liked to hand write this letter, but I wanted to remain anonymous.
You have been working hard…oh so very hard.
It has been an exhausting workload.
A little thank you card doesn’t seem sufficient, but here’s hoping this brightens your day a little.

Thank you for all the computer work you do.
Thank you for helping the school look clean and beautiful.
Thank you for helping to keep the school safe.
A little thank you card doesn’t seem sufficient, but here’s hoping this brightens your day a little.



Btw, could you please do me a favor and correct my IELTS essay in return, thanks!




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