Which alternative is correct? Hi!! Is there anyone who could help me with this English exam, please?

Friends, friends...

Hello there, I'm Lucas. I am a twenty-two year old student from MG, Brazil.

The reason why I'm writing this short text is to meet people from different parts of the globe who are interested in practicing English. I've been learning the language for the past two years by myself and I really enjoy it, but unfortunately in the last months I ended up dropping it. I want to pick it up again. So, anyone who is interested in talking please send me a private message. Allright? Thanks!

First part-time job My first part-time job was as an archivist at an Eye Care Clinic. It was a good job for a sixteen-year old high-school student. I had to be at work at 07:00 a.m and would leave by noon. I remember that I got really excited about the job. I would always give my best while working because it was not easy to find a part-time job back then, and the money that I getting was enough to buy my stuff and to party - that was all wanted. In the first weeks when I started the job, the archive was a muddle. There were mountains of files spread all over the place - very disheartening. Whereupon, it occurred to me, as soon as I managed to make things neat, my job would become much easier. I toiled over that files for two months to get it organized. Even my boss was surprised when she looked at it. After that things loosed up. I worked as a part-time archivist for a year. Then, after I graduated from high school, I begin working full-time. What I liked about my occupation was, on the one hand, the workplace atmosphere. There were the doctors, the nurses, the secretaries, the people of the management sector, the cleaners, and the archivist, of course. Everyone got along well. Every month there were a worker-birthday list pinned on the kitchen's wall. So, the doctors, to observe the employees' birthday, would pay a special breakfast for everybody. On the other hand, I think working in an archive for a long period of time can be detrimental to a person's mental health. You are confined within a cramped room, alone, doing monotonous tasks all day long. After a while it starts to get boring. It was a nice part-time job, but it's not a job that I would like to go back to.

Informal transcript for a video Hi, friend. How's it going? You asked me if I had any pictures of my city or street to show you. Sorry, I don't have any pictures. I prefer videos than pictures. This is why I am recording this quick video to show you a little of my surroundings. I am now at a place nearby my house, where I like to go jogging once or twice a week. I like to come at this place because here the streets are long, wide, and paved which are great for walk and jog. Other reason for that is there are not much vehicles going around. Bye the way, the audio is not the real audio of the video because I was feeling like a weirdo shooting the video and talking with the camera on the street - I am a bit shy. Also because if you talk while you're running you lose your breath, right? This video will be like a narrative. Anyway. I'll talk a bit about my city. My city has around 200.000 inhabitants. It's not such a big place - it bores me to death sometimes - and it is very, very hot most part of the year. We're in the last days of summer and today's temperature was like 30-31 degrees Celsius. I live 15 minutes car-drive from downtown. What I like about my neighborhood is, as I said, it's away from downtown, therefore we don't have traffic noises. I definitely enjoy it. It's situated on the edge of the city so along the one side of it and beyond there are small forested hills and green fields, which makes the air fresher and the landscape pretty. We're used to wake up hearing birds singing as well as roosters crowing. One or two neighbors on the quarter bring up fowls so we normally hear them at daybreak. On weekdays as I have to get up early is very pleasant to hear them, but on weekends I feel like I want them for lunch.