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Hello, I am from the United States of America. My name is Christopher and I work a full time job as an inspector in aerospace manufacturing. I am learning a language to be able to understand more people in the world around me so that i can learn and understand their way of life as well as the world around me. There are plenty of opportunities present to those who are multilingual and I would like to take advantage of these opportunities to advance my life, career, and intelligence. On italki, I am looking for people to help me speak Japanese. I am quite new to it but I'm working hard to learn. I wouldn't mind helping people with English as well, if this is possible for me to do. Also, french is so easy compared to learning Japanese, but its still difficult. Anyone who is French and willing to help will be greatly appreciated.
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    Rich and Poor Countries.

    The wealth distribution is inequitative unequal among countries. Although even though richer governments can help poorer ones. Seconds have the responsibility of caring their internal problems.

    Historically, the richest countries had have taken advantage of their economic position for by maintaining other countries under their control. Because of that, during a lot of the time some poor governments blamed them about every internal problem.

    While, wealthy countries must correct those historical actions, they could make it by providing help on in many ways to poor countries. For example, they should send economic support but only to stimulate the economy. Also, they could make advises give advice about education, health or social programs to improve the situation in poor countries.

    Again, every country must look at their solution, including poor ones. They must take responsibility about for their internal problems and search for a possible solution because the external help could may not to be last forever. Sooner or later, richer countries will have their own internal problems and poorer ones must be ready about that.

    In conclusion, if wealthy countries can help poorer ones, every country must take responsibility about for their population, including their internal problems.

     

     

     

    Your english isnt bad at all, but your grammar needs work. Also, to deal with the toppic of your notebook entry: You should try to keep in mind that when governments help other countries, it cost money, and the government gets that money by taking it from their own people. Therefore, as much as it sounds nice, it will make the government very unpopular with its own people if they take money from them to give it to other people around the world they dont know and have never met. Its very easy for a government to lose it's letgitimacy by taking money from its people to give to other people in different countries. These governments are more concerned about losing power if they take money from their people (more than they already have), than they are about the welfare of other countries.



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    I love writing. i'm I'm a writer in Arabic & and Iwant to become one also in English as well. So this is a small example: .


    Awaken from your dreams and Make it your reality ..

    Turn the pain into power
    Every day, every hour ..

    i get all the world on my head ..

     

    Also "turn the pain into power every day every hour" are song lyrics from "superheroes" by The Script.

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    neutral

    When we are 'neutral' we have no strong opinion.

    for example ,

    They were arguing but I was neutral.
    I'm neutral about the up coming upcoming election.

     

    Your English is great. Other than that one mistake (which I am sure some native English speakers would make as well), it was well written. Maybe try to look into punctuation more though.

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    why i want to learn english

    Hi everyone! i I am Wang Xianglong I am from JiangXi China. I can see more and more foreigners in China and i I really want to make some foreign friends but I only know a little English. , I cannot talk with them. If you are interested in Chinese, we can learn from each other. Thank you!

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    I hope to make an American friend!

    I like American very mach much. I want to travel, but not in English. I want to pay a friend learning Chinese in order to learn from each other. You can teach me English, and I will teach you Chinese. Come and contact me!

     

     

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    Learning

    Hiii iam I am looking for a native speaker for of the English language to learn teach me and make me good in at English, and thanks.


    But i think the best way to say it would be:

    "Hello, I am looking for a native English speaker to teach me and improve my English, thank you!"

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    Mers MERS attacks Korea.

    Recently, Korea is confused because of Mers MERS. I am worry worried about infection from me to my family. Cuz because I work in a Hospital. So, I try to wash my hands as soon as I leave at the hospital and wear a mask when I take the subway. I wish Mers MERS would go away faster!!!!!

     

    You wrote it well and you were able to communicate your thoughts effectively. I was just a little picky about your grammar. Another point to make, is that MERS is an acronym meaning that it is composed of letters that stand for words and must therefore be written completely in capitals in order to make the distinction from a word itself. Middle East respiratory syndrome when abbreviated with its anocronym should show as MERS

     

    You did write your English well though, good job!

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