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Rich and Poor Countries. The wealth distribution is inequitative among countries. Although richer governments can help poorer ones. Seconds have the responsibility of caring their internal problems. Historically, richest countries had taken advantage of their economic position for maintaining other countries under their control. Because of that, during a lot of time some poor governments blamed them about every internal problem. While, wealthy countries must correct those historical actions, they could make it providing help on many ways to poor countries. For example, they should send economic support but only to stimulate the economy. Also, they could make advises about education, health or social programs to improve the situation in poor countries. Again, every country must look at their solution, including poor ones. They must take responsibility about their internal problems and search a possible solution because the external help could not to be forever. Sooner or later, richer countries will have their own internal problems and poorer ones must be ready about that. In conclusion, if wealthy countries can help poorer ones, every country must take responsibility about their population, including their internal problems. Saludos desde México.

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Rich and Poor Countries.

The wealth distribution is not divided equally among countries. Although richer governments can help poorer ones. The latter has the responsibility of handling for their own internal problems.

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Historically, richer countries have taken advantage of their economic situation  and tend to control poorer countries. (sueno mejor para mí)  Therefore, some poorer governments blamed themselves for internal problem.

While, wealthy countries must fix their own problems,(historical actions no es claro en este contexto!!!) they could provide help in many ways to poor countries. For example, they should send economic aid (aid en este caso com economica asistencia)  but only to stimulate the economy. Also, they could provide assistance in education, health or social programs to improve the situation in poorest countries. (en este contexto poorest)

Again, every country must look at their situation, including the poorer ones. (poorer ones) They must take responsibility about their internal problems and search for a possible solution, because the external help will not go on forever. Sooner or later, richer countries will have their own internal problems to handle and poorer ones must be ready for that.

In conclusion, if wealthier countries can help poorer ones, every country should take responsibility for their population, including their internal problems.

Buen trabajo.  ciudate con poorer, poorest depende de la oración.


Saludos desde México.

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Rich and Poor Countries.

The wealth distribution is inequitative unequal among countries. Although even though richer governments can help poorer ones. Seconds have the responsibility of caring their internal problems.

Historically, the richest countries had have taken advantage of their economic position for by maintaining other countries under their control. Because of that, during a lot of the time some poor governments blamed them about every internal problem.

While, wealthy countries must correct those historical actions, they could make it by providing help on in many ways to poor countries. For example, they should send economic support but only to stimulate the economy. Also, they could make advises give advice about education, health or social programs to improve the situation in poor countries.

Again, every country must look at their solution, including poor ones. They must take responsibility about for their internal problems and search for a possible solution because the external help could may not to be last forever. Sooner or later, richer countries will have their own internal problems and poorer ones must be ready about that.

In conclusion, if wealthy countries can help poorer ones, every country must take responsibility about for their population, including their internal problems.

 

 

 

Your english isnt bad at all, but your grammar needs work. Also, to deal with the toppic of your notebook entry: You should try to keep in mind that when governments help other countries, it cost money, and the government gets that money by taking it from their own people. Therefore, as much as it sounds nice, it will make the government very unpopular with its own people if they take money from them to give it to other people around the world they dont know and have never met. Its very easy for a government to lose it's letgitimacy by taking money from its people to give to other people in different countries. These governments are more concerned about losing power if they take money from their people (more than they already have), than they are about the welfare of other countries.



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Thanks a lot walkitalki for your comment.
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difficult subject but you did very well saludos

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