Coming home !!!!!!

Tomorrow, i'm I'm (I am) going to come back home and it's great for me!!!!!!!
If you have a chance, you should visit Vietnam, which is also my country. so you You can see that Vietnam has many provinces as well as cities. Each place has not only specific beauty, but also tourist areas. and Naturally, someone Anyone who gone has been there, will also know Ho Chi Minh city (aka Saigon). It's (It is) the most famous modern city in Vietnam with modern. Now, I'm (I am) living with my best friends there to study at my university, but it isn't (is not) my hometown. Because I was born in Dong Nai province, I have been had lived there for a long time before I moved into Ho Chi Minh city.
In fact, i I often take more than two hours from Ho Chi Minh city to my house in Dong Nai at on the weekends to visit my parents and my younger brother. While my dad was picking picks me up, my mom was cooking cooks my favourite food, for me then and we ate eat meals together and told the tell each other stories. We smiled a lot so I could can feel sentiment whose what my family for to me. It's (It is) very warm.
Although, I only go home one day, that which is short time, i I feel very happy. Therefore, I am still trying to arrange the time in order to go home <33333

I was taught not to use contractions, although it is not wrong to use them.

Jealousy

When we met together each other, I loved you. You loved her, but you said you liked me :3
What hurt I was very hurt!
Every day, and every night, I fell in love with you, but you were still in love with her :)? Why? Why did you made me hurt me? Because I loved you so much or you didn' t care about me.? Tell me please, my boy. I'm (I am) very hurt right now.

I would use "I am," not "I'm," although "I'm" is not wrong.

Happyness Happiness <3

A few days ago, I've have heard a socail some news. It almost made me almost cried cry. Its content was about a dumb man and a blind dog. Two months ago, someone gave him a little dog. He was very happy when he had got the dog. But, its eyes couldn’t open;, they were always closed tightly (or tightly closed). That makes made the man be worried. He spend spent all his little money  to treated its eyes, but they still couldn’t open. Then, he knew realized that his dog is was a blind dog, but he went on loved and cared for it as if it were his own a child of him. He is was a shoeshine man. Every day, he walks walked all over the crowded streets in of (I know "in" can be used, but "of" makes mre sense.) Ho Chi Minh city to look for people that who want to polish their shoes polished. He has had no family, relatives , house, or apartment to rest in. Every night, he sleeps slept on the roadside, even on rainy days. So, his life is had been very hard and difficult. The dog is was his only close relative. He brings brought it everywhere, takes and protects it. Now, his life is has been very happy and not lonely. Best wishes for them.

You need to keep the tenses the same. Past with past, present with present, and future with future.

Some qualities of good friends

Nowadays, everyone has lots of acquaintances, however but they don't do not have a real friend. They always wonder,: "Why we don't I have a best friends? To make a good friend, ship whay what should we I do?" This essay will show you some qualities of good friends to help you find your bestie soon. :D

Firstly, I think it's (it is) thoughtful. When when you have a friend who knows everything about you. How wonderful is that?!

Secondly, it is unselfishness. In in friendship, in that we must give and take. This quality will last make your friendship last longer.

Finally, the trusty is the most important side quality of a good friend. Why? Because, in In my point of view, when we became become friends, we had have to believe in each other. After been being together for a long time, faced facing with lots of troubles, and arguements, you will have a good friend, and trusty always appears in your friendship.

How to Save The Earth.

The human Human race did not create nature, yet we feel we have the right to use it in whatever manner we like. Currently, we are regret what we have done and try to make the situation better. First, although we cannot glue the ozone back together, we can reduce greenhouse gases by planting more trees. The benefits Benefits of trees include reducing your air-conditioning cost by providing shade, pulling carbon dioxide out of our environment, and creating oxygen. Second, walk more and drive less. For instance, walking or cycling, both are good for your health and the environment. Every time Everytime you avoid using cars, you are contributing to lessening the air pollution. Third, to save energy, turn off electrical devices;, help to protect the environment by switching them off completely when not using them. Together, we can save our planet!

Facebook... the right way to use it!

I have always had some doubts about using Facebook or other social networks in general. We can share a lot of things, but sometimes, I have had an impression that we forgot forget to share our life with real people near us. During the last months, utilizing Facebook for my language groups, I think I have discovered the right way to use it. Social networks are really (or very) useful in these situations because I can study a language; I can meet friends really far from me and help them with my native language. I'm (I am, not that "I'm" is wrong to use.) really satisfied of what I daily obtain from these groups and I'm (I am) glad to have started this adventure. I (have) found wonderful people and some of them who are now my friends. and even if using With Facebook as means, I believe we can have a real friendship.