Coming home !!!!!!

Tomorrow, i'm I'm (I am) going to come back home and it's great for me!!!!!!!
If you have a chance, you should visit Vietnam, which is also my country. so you You can see that Vietnam has many provinces as well as cities. Each place has not only specific beauty, but also tourist areas. and Naturally, someone Anyone who gone has been there, will also know Ho Chi Minh city (aka Saigon). It's (It is) the most famous modern city in Vietnam with modern. Now, I'm (I am) living with my best friends there to study at my university, but it isn't (is not) my hometown. Because I was born in Dong Nai province, I have been had lived there for a long time before I moved into Ho Chi Minh city.
In fact, i I often take more than two hours from Ho Chi Minh city to my house in Dong Nai at on the weekends to visit my parents and my younger brother. While my dad was picking picks me up, my mom was cooking cooks my favourite food, for me then and we ate eat meals together and told the tell each other stories. We smiled a lot so I could can feel sentiment whose what my family for to me. It's (It is) very warm.
Although, I only go home one day, that which is short time, i I feel very happy. Therefore, I am still trying to arrange the time in order to go home <33333

I was taught not to use contractions, although it is not wrong to use them.

Coming home !!!!!!

Tomorrow, i'm going to come back home and it's great for me!!!!!!!
If you have a chance, you should visit Vietnam If you have a chance, which is also my country, so you can see that Vietnam has many provinces as well as cities. Each place has not only specific beauty but also touristic areas and natural panoramas, someone who have gone here,anyone who went will know Ho Chi Minh city. It's the most famous modern city in Vietnam with modern. Now I'm living I live with my best friends there to study at my university but it isn't my hometown. Because I was born in Dong Nai province, I have had been there for a long time before I moved into Ho Chi Minh city.
In fact, it often takes more than two hours from Ho Chi Minh city to my house in Dong Nai at the weekend to visit my parent and my younger little brother. While my dad was picking me up, my mom was cooking my favourite food for me then we ate meals together and told shared the each other stories. We smiled laughed a lot so I could feel sentiment whose what my family means for to me. It's very warm.
Although, I only go home one day that wich is a short time, i feel very happy. Therefore, I'm still trying to arrange time in order to go home <33333