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    Note [The Tokyo Gas Attack in 1995] Please help me to correct my essay>< I tried my best to fix simple errors but I'm not pretty sure about grammars>< This is the first paragraph of my research paper about The Tokyo GAs Attack. If you are familiar with essays or MLA format, please teach me some rules that I definitely should know. More than 5000 people had injured and 12 people had killed by the Tokyo underground sarin gas attack in 1995.(Watt, 569) This very first biochemical terroristic attack that happened in the capital of Japan shocked all over the world and illuminated terror of an alternative biochemical indiscriminate terrorist attack. Tokyo was considered as a highly secure country, however, this terrorism attack caused to consider about security to raise caution for domestic terrorism and strength security for the domestic terrorism attack. To figure out what extent did the Tokyo gas attack of 1995 influence Japan’s approach to security, this summative will identify security and compare the security structures before and after the gas attack with the understanding of Japanese cultural socio-psychological features. An analysis of Tokyo gas attack reveals the issue in Japan’s security: lack of security enforcement to against terroristic attack, very collective mindset as cultural code, a strong band of hierarchy by social positions.
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    March 10, 2016
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    私は泳ぎぐのが好きです。

    私は泳ぎぐのが好きです。折よく(なので)泳げます。
    私はバスに乗るのが好きです。折よく、私はよくバスに乗ります。
    私は(言語)語を勉強するのが大好きです。折よく、(なので)大学で(言語)語を勉強したいです。
    私は本を読むのが好きです。
    私は雨がそんなにすきありません。折り悪く、ベルギーでに住んでいます。ベルギーでは雨がよく振ります。でも、春になったから、嬉しいです。
    私は選択(洗濯)するのが好きでわはありません。折よく、お母さんは私に選択(洗濯)します。



    ”折よく” ちょうど良い時に(運よく)lucky, fortunately.

    私は靴紐を結びました。折よくお金が落ちているのに気付きました。

    私は窓を開けました。折よく気持ちいい風が吹いてきました。

    "折悪く” 運悪く unlucky, unfortunately.

    私はとても喉が渇きました。折悪く財布を持っていませんでした。

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    March 10, 2016
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    Is it better to enjoy your money or is it better to save the money for the future?-Toefl It is always difficult to take balance how much you want to spend and how much you save in bank. Although, there is people who doesn't save money to enjoy the moment of life, it is wiser to save money in bank. To support this idea, I'm going talk about two main points. First, for the time when you need big amount of money in the future. Second, You can earn interests when you save a mount of money in bank. Primary, in life time there is some events that you have to prepare large money such as marriage, traveling or the tuition for the university. When that time has come to you, you have to be able to pay them otherwise you will get a loan. Loan is little bit tricky because the money you have to pay will increase by time pass. While you have loan, you have to save most of your income just for earlier settlement. In my experience, there are many people who fail to pay their loan because they didn't save enough money in bank. In other words, if you had saved enough money in bank, you may be able to pay when it's necessary. So saving money will give you more opportunity for wealthy life with many interesting events, therefore, I prefer to save some money to prepare for some time in the future. Secondary, when you save a number of money, you can earn interests from the bank. Each bank has multiple option to choose the type of interest. So you are possible to choose best option that fit to your situation and income. Interest may seems like nothing big deal, however, longer you save money in the bank the interest will increase and it will become enough to help you to be able to get more opportunity to be successful. In conclusion, I prefer save some money in bank for your enjoyable life and earn some extra money out of money you have. I believe, to be more successful in your life, saving money is the first step.
    March 10, 2016
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    はじめまして。

    はじめまして。シャバナ(Shabana)ともうします。
    出身はインドの ムンバイ市 です。
    私は約5年間 日本語を 勉強 しています。
    二ヶ月前にJLPT-N2(中級レベル)を合格できました。 
    次はN1(上級レベル)を目指しています。
    日本語の勉強のために日本語をが話せる友達を探しています。
    ヒンディ語か英語か日本語で話せることができます。
    お友達になれれば嬉しいです!
    よろしくお願いします。
    シャバナ
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    March 9, 2016
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    March 9, 2016
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    日本で生活するならときに不便なところ

    もう日本についていい点を十分紹介しましたからので、今次は不便なこと点を紹介させていただきます。
    まずは日本の飲み物です。まずすぎだと思います。豆乳とか、ヨーグルトとか、口当たりは全然全く耐えられません。自動販売機はどこでにでもよくありますが、普通の水だけ買ってください。しないと、後悔するかもしれませんよ。
    また、日本の果物は高いです。みんな、知っているでしょう。(ご存知の方も多いでしょう)でもまだ高くて買えないという程度ではありません。メロン以外の果物は、時々買っても大丈夫です。
    それから、一番苦戦することはゴミ処理です。単に何をどこに捨てればいいのか分かってもまだいっぱい(たくさんの)のルールがありますよ。例えばコンビニに買ったお弁当を食べ終わって何をするのどうするのか知っていますか。そうです、ゴミをきれいに洗うことです。洗わなければなりません。もしインスタントラーメンを食べるなら、そのラーメンの包装だけではなく、中の調味料の包装もちゃんときれいまで洗わなければなりません。ですから、皆さん、想像してみよう。放課後、スーパーに楽しくいっぱいのものを買ってから家でドラマを見ながら、お寿司を醤油に付けて食てべながら。「一人の生活がいいな」と考えています。しかし、あなたを迎えるのは山のような洗わなければならないゴミです。怖いでしょう。私、日本に行って初めの日はゴミを洗ってばかりでした。ずっとごみを洗って洗って今後は何でも食べたくなりましたなることもありました。もし日本へ留学したくないなら、ゴミの処理は唯一の一つの理由だと信じています。

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    March 9, 2016
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    Why some people are attracted to dangerous sports or other dangerous activities? -Toefl Essay Thrill and Pleasure There is always number of people who attracted in dangerous sports or activities such as skydiving, rock climbing or car race. In my opinion, the reason of dangerous sports attractiveness is because when people feel thrill, that brings sense of alive and pleasure. Sometimes thrilling activities helps to reduce mental stress. To began with the thrilling activities and pleasure. While people playing sports, their hart beat get faster and blood stream increase. Also thrill will brings fast heat beats as well as sports. The physical settlement provide the brain to produce a chemical, call adrenaline. Adrenaline is the main factor of people to feel excitement and pleasure and the reason for attractiveness or addictiveness of dangerous sports. My own experience is a good example of this. I go to snowboarding since I was ten years old. In that time, snowboardings are most thrilling and exciting activity since sometime I lost control. That thrill made me sweat and beating heart but at same time I feel some sort of pleasure. Almost every person has those experience because it is the natural function of our body. Therefore people are attracted to dangerous sports. Secondly, dangerous activities helps get rid of persons stress and worry. Many dangerous activities requires large settings such as mountains or ocean. The unusual setting helps to forget about stress and worries of daily life and flesh air will make your feeling better. Back to my experience of snowboarding, while i focusing on the dangerous situation, there was no time to think about my problems. And the icy air of winter mountain cleaned my mind. That help me to rethink about all conflicts in school and home works much calmly. The unusual situation helps people to change their perspective and reduce stress when they are focusing on dangerous activity. In conclusion, people are attracted by dangerous sports and activities because it produce excitement and reduce stress by putting themselves into unusual situation. P. S. Long time no post on Italki... I feel kinda nervous by posting this but hope someone very nice fix the errors><
    March 9, 2016
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    How can I improve my speaking skill for TOEFL?? I want to improve my pronounce and skill to develop critical thinking in short time. What is the most affective way to practice them?
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    新しい文法を習った

    昨日、日本語の授業で新しい言葉を習った。
    あのその文法は受身形ですだった。

    ちょっと難しいと思います。
    使ってみてね。

    私は皆に弱い日本語で書いた日記をみられました。

    正しいですか? 文法はあってます。


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    July 14, 2015
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