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    Could you please correct my sentences?

    I'd like to post below sentences on my blog.(https://gogomountain.blogspot.jp/2016/09/hakkoda.html)
    Please correct it.

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    Mt.Hakkoda is located in Aomori Prefecture, Japan. It is one of the mountains that was designated as the 100 famous mountains in Japan.The distance from Tokyo to Mt.Hakkoda is about 700km (430miles). Then I took an overnight bus to get there (You can use the train of Shinkansen, but it's very expensive.)

    As a matter of fact, there is not exist the name of Mt.Hakkoda does not exist. Mt.Hakkoda is consists of several mountains. The most highest mountain is Mt.Odake(1,585m). After Mt.Odake, the highest mountains are Idodake(1,537m) and Akakuradake (1,521m). We call it Mt.Hakkoda as a generic name. I climbed above three mountains at this time.

    If you go there, I'd recommend you to go the Kenashi Wetlands and the Sukayu Onsen (hot spring). You can go the Sukayu Onsen from Odake via Kenashi Wetlands. I am confident that you can see the fabulous scenery and you can enjoy good quality Onsen in Sukayu.

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    Mt.Hakkoda is located in Aomori Prefecture, Japan. It is one of the mountains that was designated as the 100 famous mountains in Japan.The distance from Tokyo to Mt.Hakkoda is about 700km (430miles). I took an overnight bus to get there (You can use the train of Shinkansen, but it's very expensive.)

    As a matter of fact, the name of Mt.Hakkoda does not exist. Mt.Hakkoda consists of several mountains. The most highest mountain is Mt.Odake(1,585m). After Mt.Odake, the highest mountains are Idodake(1,537m) and Akakuradake (1,521m). We call it Mt.Hakkoda as a generic name. I climbed above three mountains at this time.

    If you go there, I'd recommend you to go the Kenashi Wetlands and the Sukayu Onsen (hot spring). You can go the Sukayu Onsen from Odake via Kenashi Wetlands. I am confident that you can see the fabulous scenery and you can enjoy good quality Onsen in Sukayu.

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    Note from the editor: You have notably great English, my friend! I added and removed a few words and letters to help the sentence make more sense/give more structure. Nice blog. :-)


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    September 6, 2016
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    September 6, 2016
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  • Commented

    Dickens all the way. His work is outstanding!

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    June 1, 2015
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    Those words have no differences of each other. The words 'autumn', 'trousers', and 'rubbish'; are synonyms of fall, pants, and trash. 

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    June 1, 2015
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    British people use those words. It's their slang, pretty much. You rarely see Americans talking with those words.

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    June 1, 2015
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    #3 Hiiii I will be ready to be more dedicated to teaching and learning in 2 weeks when school is over! Yay.
    May 28, 2015
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    #2 Inactivity At It's Finest~ I've been inactive for a few days and if there was more time in a day, I would be on here regularly but since there's not, I remain to be inactive here and there. I've been studying a lot when I am not on here but I would really like to talk and practice my Japanese with those who are native speakers. I've been teaching many people English but most of them aren't Japanese so it gets frustrating sometimes (as rude as that sounds). I'll still help people either way because I know that the language is hard to pick up as any other language so I understand. Team work!
    May 3, 2015
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    Yes, DIDI, I go to Comic-Con every year. I also attend Anime Expo and a few other conventions~~ ☺

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    April 26, 2015
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    There are tons of good animes that came out not too long ago, Hyden! ☺ For example, DanMachi, Hibike! Euphonium, and Assassination Classroom!

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    April 26, 2015
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    Ahhh same here. ;3; I've been watching anime since I was very young. This may sound so stupid but it is a very important part of my life. I've been on and off with learning Japanese. I hope to learn more and be happy with my progress. Good luck to you! 

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    April 26, 2015
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