Could you please correct my sentences?
I'd like to post below sentences on my blog.(https://gogomountain.blogspot.jp/2016/09/hakkoda.html)
Please correct it.
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Mt.Hakkoda is located in Aomori Prefecture, Japan. It is one of the mountains that was designated as 100 famous mountains in Japan.The distance from Tokyo to Mt.Hakkoda is about 700km (430miles). Then I took an overnight bus to get there.(You can use the train of Shinkansen, but it's very expensive.)
As a matter of fact, there is not exist the name of Mt.Hakkoda. Mt.Hakkoda is consist of several mountain. The most highest mountain is Mt.Odake(1,585m). And the next of Mt.Odake, there are Idodake(1,537m) and Akakuradake(1,521m).We call the Mt.Hakkoda as a generic name. I climbed above three mountains at this time.
If you go there, I recommend to go the Kenashi Wetlands and the Sukayu Onsen(hot spring). You can go the Sukayu Onsen from Odake via Kenashi Wetlands. I confident that you can see the fabulous scenery and you can enjoy good quality Onsen in Sukayu.
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Could you please correct my sentences?
I'd like to post below sentences on my blog.(https://gogomountain.blogspot.jp/2016/09/hakkoda.html)Please correct it.
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Mt.Hakkoda is located in Aomori Prefecture, Japan. It is one of the mountains that was designated as the 100 famous mountains in Japan.The distance from Tokyo to Mt.Hakkoda is about 700km (430miles). Then I took an overnight bus to get there (You can use the train of Shinkansen, but it's very expensive.)
As a matter of fact, there is not exist the name of Mt.Hakkoda does not exist. Mt.Hakkoda is consists of several mountains. The most highest mountain is Mt.Odake(1,585m). After Mt.Odake, the highest mountains are Idodake(1,537m) and Akakuradake (1,521m). We call it Mt.Hakkoda as a generic name. I climbed above three mountains at this time.
If you go there, I'd recommend you to go the Kenashi Wetlands and the Sukayu Onsen (hot spring). You can go the Sukayu Onsen from Odake via Kenashi Wetlands. I am confident that you can see the fabulous scenery and you can enjoy good quality Onsen in Sukayu.
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Mt.Hakkoda is located in Aomori Prefecture, Japan. It is one of the mountains that was designated as the 100 famous mountains in Japan.The distance from Tokyo to Mt.Hakkoda is about 700km (430miles). I took an overnight bus to get there (You can use the train of Shinkansen, but it's very expensive.)
As a matter of fact, the name of Mt.Hakkoda does not exist. Mt.Hakkoda consists of several mountains. The most highest mountain is Mt.Odake(1,585m). After Mt.Odake, the highest mountains are Idodake(1,537m) and Akakuradake (1,521m). We call it Mt.Hakkoda as a generic name. I climbed above three mountains at this time.
If
you go there, I'd recommend you to go the Kenashi Wetlands and the Sukayu
Onsen (hot spring). You can go the Sukayu Onsen from Odake via Kenashi
Wetlands. I am confident that you can see the fabulous scenery and you can enjoy good quality Onsen in Sukayu.
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Note from the editor: You have notably great English, my friend! I added and removed a few words and letters to help the sentence make more sense/give more structure. Nice blog. :-)
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