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Internet resilience : background (maybe history instead of background?) and projection

For years, large organizations were structured is to rapidly detect and respond to cyber incidents. The new stage: a maximum limit impacts (to fight against cyber incidents?), while facilitating a normal recovery of activity.

Based on crises returns managed by the CERT, we shall have to see that this cyber resilience is conceived before and during the crisis. What changes need to be made to crisis management? How to leverage existing continuity plans? What common site ground lies between PCA channels and SSI? What to do today and what posture needs to be adopted to increase the resilience of its organization to new threats?

This presentation will be illustrated with practical experience of crisis management returns and it will be hosted by our experts on the subject.

A new treatment for cancer

The fight against the cancer progresses day by day. A cancer arises when cells breed in a disorderly way. A program named AcSé ( Accès sécurisé à des thérapies ciblées innovantes) was created by Inca (Cancer Institute) and Agency of Medicines (ANSM), in France.
A few days ago, a new type of cancer treatment saw the light of the day, as a major progress in fighting the deadly disease. This treatment is called Immunotherapy. It consists in works by targeting and rehabilitating the cells of the immune system or it helps the body to produce more immune defense systems, thanks to the crizotinib an anticancer reserved for adults, that also can be used for genetic diseases. Contrary to the chemotherapy and radiotherapy that attack healthy and ill cells, weaken and tire patients' bodies.
With this medicine, there are no side effects, like vomiting or hair loss, nor hospitalization. We just have to swallow a pill. And results come in 2 days.
Yet, this treatment is still a prototype, it is a new discovery and only a few people have had this kind of treatment. Moreover, these people were in hopeless cases, and researchers need for 15 years to know more informations about the medicine in order to commercialize it.
To me my mind, this subject is an idea of progress because this new treatment can be a rise towards developments of medicines like HIV. And especially, it could save many lifes from now on. It is a big innovation. In the future, this kind of disease might be like the influenza.

first day

It's my first day of English study again today.

English as a language

A year would have (would have is the conditional tense.) has passed since I started learning in English seriously. Japanese and English are very different languages. Its grammar, letter alphabet, the way of writing; I mean Japanese is often written up to down instead of right to left, sounds and ways of making jokes are some of examples. I am still not comfortable in speaking, reading, writing and listening to English. I am an International high school student in India. I had lots of opportunities to learn or explore new things there . But, I don't know whether I can say I got as much information as native speakers did because of this. I even don't know how to express feelings about these sad things.

I really would like to make my English a native level in this summer.

This is why I started italki :)

An exhausting Monday

An exhausting Monday
It is 23:48 pm already and just a few minutes left, a new day is coming. However, I cannot sleep. I am writing this notebook with an exhausted ing mood, as the result of a bad working day!
Yesterday was Mother's Day, but I hardly had enough 10 minutes free time to make a phone call. Although my mother does not know about Mother's Day, I still wanted to call my mother and said say that I missed her and loved her so much. The reason was from my Canadian group. A traffic jam occurred on the way from Luang Prabang to Vang Vieng so my clients were stuck for 06 hours. The mountain road was very dangerous to drive on when it became dark. My group had no choice but to return to Luang Prabang. In spite of my truthful explination, the hotel in Vang Vieng still decided to fully charge. It was no-show. However, it was an unexpected situation and I hoped they understood that not only my clients but also the others had to come back to Luang Prabang.
The traffic jam created a huge demand for rooms in Luang Prabang. All the travel agents tried their best to get the room available as last-minute booking. Unfortunately this was my first big group coming in low season (50pax and 01 tour leader) and almost big hotels, which have over 25 rooms, were fully booked!
Yes. It was an exhausting day but finally I got the great support from the Luang Prabang Expat. My group had enough room at the same hotel and we did not have to pay for the no-show booking.
From 09:30 am till 21:00 pm Sunday, I stayed at home, stuck my ear to the phone and my eyes to the clock. When the new day passed, I felt upset that I forgot to call my Mom (Y___Y)
On Monday, my boss went on a business trip without handing over anything for me. I was the only one who used to deal with her agent and knew the rules, as well as SOPs then I was suddenly chosen for the back-up position.
It was a long day when my eyes had to work with 03 screens (I think I forgot to tell you that I also backed up for a colleague during his holiday since last week). It was a great experience when you had to be a monkey, using both hand and foot to manage some smart stuffs!
The first day ended at 20:48 pm when I was starving to death and it seemed like I could eat a horse. The last happiness left was to see the city that looked so beautiful in light when I rode back home. I could not deny that the busy day made me feel better, sometimes it droven me crazy but totally I have been encouraged and motivated alot.
Another day is coming. Hope it will be better! Keep fighting!