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MY intersting is to learn the drum (我的兴趣是学架子鼓) English: Few days ago,I found the place where learned the drum ,there were so many teachers, most of boys.So,when I went to there I became so shy ahd so nervous,I am very introverted ,sometimes.Becouse of my shortcoming,I went to there in order to practice my courage,and made me more outgoing. I learned some class in the few days,I felt so good,and my teacher say:"you are very talended" when he said that ,I was so shy and a little embarrassed.But,whatever,hearing my teacher said me like that ,I was so happy ,my teacher always couraged me to more outgoing.I am relly thanking for him. Chinese: 几天前,我找到一个学习架子鼓的地方,那里有很多老师,大多数是男生,所以当我去那里的时候我很害羞并且很紧张,有时候我很内向,因为这个缺点,所以我才去那里学架子鼓来锻炼我的胆量,让我变得更加外向。 在过去的几天我学习了一些课程,感觉挺不错的,我的老师说:“你很有天赋” 当我的老师那样说我时,我很害羞并且有点不好意思,但是,无论如何,听到老师夸我,我很开心,我的老师经常鼓励我变得更加大胆点,外向点,我真的很感谢他。

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MY interst is playing drum (我的兴趣是学架子鼓)

English:
Few days age I found a place to play drum. There were many teachers, most of them are males so I was so shy and nervous to talk to them. I wanna make some changes to become more chatty and this is why I want to learn how to play drum. It's because playing drum can encourage and challenge myself.

I have had some lessons and so far I feel good. When my teacher told me you have talent I still felt shy. But anyway I feel happy when I hear his commendation and inspiration. My teacher also usually encourage me to be braver. I appreciate such so much.
Chinese:
几天前,我找到一个学习架子鼓的地方,那里有很多老师,大多数是男生,所以当我去那里的时候我很害羞并且很紧张,有时候我很内向,因为这个缺点,所以我才去那里学架子鼓来锻炼我的胆量,让我变得更加外向。
在过去的几天我学习了一些课程,感觉挺不错的,我的老师说:“你很有天赋” 当我的老师那样说我时,我很害羞并且有点不好意思,但是,无论如何,听到老师夸我,我很开心,我的老师经常鼓励我变得更加大胆点,外向点,我真的很感谢他。



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I am interested in learning  the drums (我的兴趣是学架子鼓)

English:
A few days ago, I found a place where I could learn the drums, there were so many teachers, most of them were boys. So, when I went to there I became so shy and so nervous, I am very introverted, sometimes. Because of my shortcoming, I went to there in order to practice my courage, and it made me more outgoing.
I learned some class in the few days, I felt so good, and my teacher said: "you are very talented," when he said that, I was so shy and a little embarrassed. But whatever, hearing my teacher tell me that, I was so happy, my teacher always encouraged me to be more outgoing. I am really thankful for him.

Chinese:
几天前,我找到一个学习架子鼓的地方,那里有很多老师,大多数是男生,所以当我去那里的时候我很害羞并且很紧张,有时候我很内向,因为这个缺点,所以我才去那里学架子鼓来锻炼我的胆量,让我变得更加外向。
在过去的几天我学习了一些课程,感觉挺不错的,我的老师说:“你很有天赋” 当我的老师那样说我时,我很害羞并且有点不好意思,但是,无论如何,听到老师夸我,我很开心,我的老师经常鼓励我变得更加大胆点,外向点,我真的很感谢他。

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