TOEFL independent writing
Question: Some people say that physical exercise should be a required part of every school day. Other people believe that students should spend the whole school day on academic studies. Which opinion do you agree with? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
My personal opinion:
A good grade or healthy life? Which of them do you prefer? Let’s answer the next question and find the answer!
Should sports be a required part of every school day, or no? Even though some people think that students should spend the whole day
studying at school, I believe that physical exercises have to be part of every school day because sports make people fresh and happy. Besides that,
good excercise causes poductive studying. Also, if we want to have a healthy life, we should start
teaching our children how sport is important and even
with 30 minutes
of exercise, we can guarantee a healthy life for them and even for ourselves.
The first reason
why I think physical exercise is useful is
because it makes children happy and fresh. Sport has a good effect on people. When we do exercise our
body feels better and our brain starts
to work well, so if
the brain starts
to work better
the production of what we are doing
rises. For instance, if we compare two children, we will see that the one who
does exercise
understands the material
being studied better
than the one who
does not. So we should
make sport
required in the schedules at schools.Second, healthy life is caused by regular sport. Children should probably start to do this since they are at school. I mean, as children spend so much time there, it could be a good habbit. Therefore, they will do exercises every day, and probably will like it. For example, I have been doing exercise since my childhood and now I just cannot go without it. I do it every morning and for whole day I feel nice and happy.
Thus, as we see, sport is really important. At school it must be a required every day. So let’s just take care of it and be sure that our children do it every day. What about you? What do you think about it? Do you want your child to have a healthy life and have each of his or her days be productive?
