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    大家好! 今天早上九點鐘我起床了. 然後, 吃早飯去了工作.
    在工作有時候有人給我打電話. 還有我老闆是個真嚴格的人. 工作每天都忙, 所以, 我差不多每天很累.
    回家時, 我打公車. 我家有一台車, 但我不會開車 (-_-) .
    在我家看了電視和讀書中文.
    明天下班的時候我和我哥哥會去打籃球, 還有我想吃 tacos. 所以我很高興.

    (Translation of what is hopefully written up there)
    Hello everyone! Today I got up at 9 o'clock in the morning, after that I ate breakfast and off I went to work.

    嗨,大家好!今天早上我9点就起床了,然后呢,我吃了早餐就去工作了。
    While working there are times when I have to receive a lot of phone calls, also my boss is very strict. Everyday at work is busy, so is not unusual for me to be tired almost every day.

    我工作的时候,经常得去接很多的电话,而且我的老板也很严格,工作的时候每天都很忙,这样的话,对我而言几乎每天都很累也就说的过去了(unusual,it can make sense.)
    When it was time to go home, I took a bus; my family has a car that we do not use but I don't know how to drive (-_-).
    When I got home I watched some TV and studied Chinese.

    我一般坐公交车回家,我家是有一辆车,但是我不会开,所以我们一般不用。
    Tomorrow after work my brother and I will go play some basketball, I also hope to eat some tacos, so I am happy.

    明天下班后,我想和我哥们一起去打打篮球,我还想吃点Tacos,这样想想我还是挺开心的 (确实不错 :))。
     
    I know my Chinese is far away from perfection, but please bear with me :)
    If you have any corrections or suggestions as to how to make this sound more natural, don't hesitate to type away!
    我知道我的中文离熟练还差得远,请多担待 :)

    如果你有任何改正建议而使得这个听起来更自然的话,请不要犹豫打出来告诉我。


    再見!

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    May 13, 2015
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