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Today/今天
大家好!
今天早上我九點鐘我起床了,然後, 吃完早飯就去了工作。
在工作有的時候有人給我打我接到很多通電話,還有我老闆是個真嚴格的人。
每天工作的時候每天都很忙,所以, 我每天都(一樣)差不多每天很累。
回家時,我打搭公車, 我家有一台車,但我不會開車 (-_-) .
當我在我家回到家看了電視和讀中文書中文.
明天下班的時候我和我哥哥會去打籃球, 還有我想吃 tacos, 所以我很高興。
(Translation of what is hopefully written up there)
Hello everyone! Today I got up at 9 o'clock in the morning, after that I ate breakfast and off I went to work.
While working there are times when I have to receive a lot of phone calls, also my boss is very strict.
Everyday at work is busy, so is not unusual for me to be tired almost every day.
When it was time to go home, I took a bus; my family has a car that we do not use but I don't know how to drive (-_-).
When I got home I watched some TV and studied Chinese.
Tomorrow after work my brother and I will go play some basketball, I also hope to eat some tacos, so I am happy.
I know my Chinese is far away from perfection, but please bear with me :)
If you have any corrections or suggestions as to how to make this sound more natural, don't hesitate to type away!
再見!
Today/今天
大家好! (我)今天早上九點鐘起床了. 然後, 吃早飯去了工作. (吃完早饭就去上班)
在工作(工作当中)有時候有人(会)給我打電話. 還有我老闆是個真(非常)嚴格的人. (所以)工作每天都忙, 所以, 我差不多每天(都)很累.
回家時, 我(会)打公車. (其实)我家有一台車, 但我不會開車 (-_-) .
(回到家之后)在我家(我)看了電視和讀書中文.
明天下班的時候我和我哥哥會去打籃球, 還有我想吃 tacos. (因此)所以我很高興.
(Translation of what is hopefully written up there)
Hello everyone! Today I got up at 9 o'clock in the morning, after that I ate breakfast and off I went to work.
While working there are times when I have to receive a lot of phone calls, also my boss is very strict. Everyday at work is busy, so is not unusual for me to be tired almost every day.
When it was time to go home, I took a bus; my family has a car that we do not use but I don't know how to drive (-_-).
When I got home I watched some TV and studied Chinese.
Tomorrow after work my brother and I will go play some basketball, I also hope to eat some tacos, so I am happy.
I know my Chinese is far away from perfection, but please bear with me :)
If you have any corrections or suggestions as to how to make this sound more natural, don't hesitate to type away!
再見!
Today/今天
大家好! 今天早上九點鐘我起床了. 然後, 吃早飯去了工作.
在工作有時候有人給我打電話. 還有我老闆是個真嚴格的人. 工作每天都忙, 所以, 我差不多每天很累.
回家時, 我打公車. 我家有一台車, 但我不會開車 (-_-) .
在我家看了電視和讀書中文.
明天下班的時候我和我哥哥會去打籃球, 還有我想吃 tacos. 所以我很高興.
(Translation of what is hopefully written up there)
Hello everyone! Today I got up at 9 o'clock in the morning, after that I ate breakfast and off I went to work.
嗨,大家好!今天早上我9点就起床了,然后呢,我吃了早餐就去工作了。
While working there are times when I have to receive a lot of phone calls, also my boss is very strict. Everyday at work is busy, so is not unusual for me to be tired almost every day.
我工作的时候,经常得去接很多的电话,而且我的老板也很严格,工作的时候每天都很忙,这样的话,对我而言几乎每天都很累也就说的过去了(unusual,it can make sense.)
When it was time to go home, I took a bus; my family has a car that we do not use but I don't know how to drive (-_-).
When I got home I watched some TV and studied Chinese.
我一般坐公交车回家,我家是有一辆车,但是我不会开,所以我们一般不用。
Tomorrow after work my brother and I will go play some basketball, I also hope to eat some tacos, so I am happy.
明天下班后,我想和我哥们一起去打打篮球,我还想吃点Tacos,这样想想我还是挺开心的 (确实不错 :))。
I know my Chinese is far away from perfection, but please bear with me :)
If you have any corrections or suggestions as to how to make this sound more natural, don't hesitate to type away!
我知道我的中文离熟练还差得远,请多担待 :)
如果你有任何改正建议而使得这个听起来更自然的话,请不要犹豫打出来告诉我。
再見!
Today/今天
大家好! 今天早上九點鐘我起床了. 然後, 吃早飯去了工作.
在工作有時候有人給我打電話. 還有我老闆是個真嚴格的人. 工作每天都忙, 所以, 我差不多每天很累.
回家時, 我打公車. 我家有一台車, 但我不會開車 (-_-) .
在我家看了電視和讀書中文.
明天下班的時候我和我哥哥會去打籃球, 還有我想吃 tacos. 所以我很高興.
(Translation of what is hopefully written up there)
Hello everyone! Today I got up at 9 o'clock in the morning, 今天九點起床, after that I ate breakfast and off I went to work. 吃了早餐就上班.
While working there are times when I have to receive a lot of phone calls, [Are these business or private calls? I assume that are private ones because of what's coming next] 在工作的時候, 私人電話甚多also my boss is very strict. 而老闆非常嚴厲. Everyday at work is busy, 每天工作都忙碌so is not unusual for me to be tired almost every day. 因此每天都覺得疲倦.
Present tense is needed because this is an everyday routine. Otherwise, past tense indicates that currently it is no longer true.
When it was is time to go home, 下班時, I took a take the bus. 我搭巴士回家. my We have a family has a car that we do not use but since I don't know how to drive (-_-). 我们有私家車, 但沒用它因為我不會/開車/駕駛/
When I get home I watched some TV and study Chinese. 回家了, 看看一些電視 和 念念一些中文.
Tomorrow after work my brother and I will go play some basketball, I also hope to eat some tacos, so I am happy. 明天工作完了, 就和/弟弟/哥哥/ 打籃球, 也希望能吃些「塔科」, 我就樂意了.
Very understandable but this is a more precise and natural way. You are doing great. Keep up and soon you will improve, especially if you ask when you don't understand the correction.
I know my Chinese is far away from perfection, but please bear with me :)
If you have any corrections or suggestions as to how to make this sound more natural, don't hesitate to type away!
再見!
Today/今天
大家好! 今天早上我九點鐘起床, 然後吃完早飯就去工作。
工作時不時會收到很多電話,而且我老闆是個很嚴格的人。每天工作都忙,所以,我差不多每天都很累。
下班時我打公車回家。我家有一台不用的車, 但我不會開車 (-_-) 。在家我看了會電視還學習學習了中文。明天下班后我會和我哥(哥)去打籃球, 我還想吃tacos,這樣我會很開心。
(Translation of what is hopefully written up there)
Hello everyone! Today I got up at 9 o'clock in the morning, after that I ate breakfast and off I went to work.
While working there are times when I have to receive a lot of phone calls, also my boss is very strict. Everyday at work is busy, so is not unusual for me to be tired almost every day.
When it was time to go home, I took a bus; my family has a car that we do not use but I don't know how to drive (-_-).
When I got home I watched some TV and studied Chinese.
Tomorrow after work my brother and I will go play some basketball, I also hope to eat some tacos, so I am happy.
I know my Chinese is far away from perfection, but please bear with me :)
If you have any corrections or suggestions as to how to make this sound more natural, don't hesitate to type away!
再見!(Well, you can say goodbye/bye at last in English, but it's very strange to put 再見 here.)
Your Chinese is good. Though it doesn't sound very natural, but I can totally understand what you mean. I made some corrections to make it more natural and vivid. If you've got any questions, feel free to ask me.
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