Chinese sentences.

大家好! Hello everyone!
Please help me to find mistakes in these sentences（Or maybe just improve them somehow）. I'm especially worried about words order.

我喜欢和家人喝茶。 - I like to drink tea with my family.

你认识那些人吗？ - Do you know those people?
我认识<font style="background-color: yellow;">老的</font>，不认识年轻的。 - I know the old one, don't know the young one.我认识<font style="background-color: yellow;">年长的</font>

在北京住的女人。 - <font style="background-color: yellow;">A woman</font> who lives in Beijing.<font style="background-color: yellow;">一个住在北京的女人a/an/the  I think you are good at using these article words.
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今天我去书店了，在那里我买<font style="background-color: yellow;">了</font>两本书。 - Today I've visited a book store, I've bought two books there.

我在美国公司工作。 - I work in <font style="background-color: yellow;">an american company</font>.我在<font style="background-color: yellow;">一家</font>美国公司工作

你昨天为什么没来？ - Why didn't you come yesterday?

你喜欢看电视<font style="background-color: yellow;">吗</font>？ - do you like to watch TV?<font style="background-color: yellow;"> If the sentence is used in oral Chinese, it is okay, your partner can realize you ask him the question. However, in written, you would better add the character "吗".</font>
不喜欢，但是我喜欢看书，你呢？ - I don't like, but I like to read books, and you?
我和我的女朋友都喜欢看电视。 - Me and my girlfriend both like to watch TV.

美国人写的书。 -<font style="background-color: yellow;"> A book</font> written by an American.<font style="background-color: yellow;">一本</font>美国人写的书

你喝茶还是咖啡？ - You are drinking tea or coffee?
喝茶。 - Tea.
什么茶？ - What tea?
<font style="background-color: yellow;">中国的。</font> - Chinese.<font style="background-color: yellow;">中式的</font>

Thank you! 谢谢！