History could help us to understand the present or not.

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History was always is a controversial subject and everyone has their own understand, even are some that consider it as a useless subject with many viewpoints about its importance. Some people believe that history helps us to understand the present and while the others don’t have either opinion are indifferent. Both of these views will be discussed in this essay to may in an attempt to reveal the fact behind understand the their reasoning.

It is asserts that h History must be <em>studied</em> to understand the present. Human’s A person's life is faced with permanent rules and lows laws which are constant for apply to each person in each era and location regardless of location and time. Therefore, the rules can be used presently in our one's life [as a treasure experience (not sure what you mean here)] /are a means to understand the impact of the past. For instance, tThroughout the history, there were people encountering with different occasions that will occur in our life as well the same problems that occur today. So it would be is possible to inspire(?) those who were successful in their occasion. Thus, this example illustrates the positive influence of history in our one's present life.

Beside of this positive attitude to history are Even though history directly impacts people's lives, some people who deem history as a useless subject. Among them is felt These people believe that humans most can decide act accordingly to their situation and its own intelligent with their intelligence, although some of them couldn't cannot ignore the impact of history on intelligent intelligence. For example, it is some people argue that each era has a different roles/rules(?) and priorities and by sticking them you cannot progress in life adherence to such an outdated belief will stunt human growth. However, Although this claim is acceptable in some aspects, it is not convincing.

After analyzing these two points of view, although some believes history couldn't help us in the present, it is hard to judge whether history as is a useless subject. It would be wrong to living live and predicting predict the future by attention to without knowledge about history but as it w history could provide a valuable key when we humanity couldn't cannot open a lock with our intelligent solve a problem with its current intellect. 

I can help you! I'll message you my skype details! 

I need to ask myself ，what kind of life I want

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I need to ask myself what kind of life I want.
我需要问问自己，到底想要怎样的生活

If I choose a high salary job, I will have no time.
如果选择较高工资的工作，就会没有时间

If the job have a free time but less income. Less stressful jobs pay less.  
有空闲的时间的工作，但是工资少

I don't know how what to choose.
我不知道该怎么选择

The life needs money, but money is not the life complete.

Money is necessary for life, but does not complete it. 
生活需要钱,钱不是生活的全部

Last year, I have had a lot of free time I can to learn the languages.
去年，我有很多空余时间可以学习语言

I can often have a talk with my language partner,
我可以经常和我的语言伙伴聊天

In addition to have no money  Even though I had no money, but I was very happy
除了没钱，但是很开心

In August last year, I had a new job, high wages for less time. 
去年八月份换了新的工作，工资相比高了些，可是时间少了

The new job is was very stressful，and I was Most of the time was unhappy most of the time. 
新工作压力很大，很多时候不开心

I want to change my life， I need to change , I must to be change. 

我要改变我的生活状态,需要改变，必须要改变

感觉像我在读一首诗。This is very good! I hope you feel less stressed out now! I edited this to be more like a poem because it sounds so poetic. :) 加油！

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One of my best friends is called jinjia. She is a very optimistic and funny person. She is kind to me and we get along well with each other. She was born into a big family as the youngest child because she and has three brothers and one sister, and she is the youngest child in her family. But her two brothers don't care about her old parents, so she is very annoyed. And Now she still study studies at school so that she can take care of her parents when she grows up. , she said when she grow up, she will take care of her parents patiently. I totally agree with her and I trust her because she is determined/hard-working. Nothing is more important than our parents. They gave us birth to us, so we should appreciate them. I love my parents very much, and nothing can replace them in my heart.

Final Version: 

One of my best friends is Jinjia. She is a very optimistic and funny person. She is kind to me and we get along well. She was born into a big family as the youngest child and has three brothers and one sister. But her two brothers don't care about her old parents, so she is very annoyed. Now she studies at school so that she can take care of her parents when she grows up. I totally agree with her and I trust her because she is determined/hard-working. Nothing is more important than our parents. They gave birth to us, so we should appreciate them. I love my parents very much, and nothing can replace them in my heart. 

I agree! We should cherish our parents. Nice job!