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I need to ask myself ,what kind of life I want
bold= my corrections
I need to ask myself what kind of life I want.
我需要问问自己,到底想要怎样的生活
If I choose a high salary job, I will have no time.
如果选择较高工资的工作,就会没有时间
If the job have a free time but less income. Less stressful jobs pay less.
有空闲的时间的工作,但是工资少
I don't know how what to choose.
我不知道该怎么选择
The life needs money, but money is not the life complete.
Money is necessary for life, but does not complete it.
生活需要钱,钱不是生活的全部
Last year, I have had a lot of free time I can to learn the languages.
去年,我有很多空余时间可以学习语言
I can often have a talk with my language partner,
我可以经常和我的语言伙伴聊天
In addition to have no money Even though I had no money, but I was very happy
除了没钱,但是很开心
In August last year, I had a new job, high wages for less time.
去年八月份换了新的工作,工资相比高了些,可是时间少了
The new job is was very stressful,and I was Most of the time was unhappy most of the time.
新工作压力很大,很多时候不开心
I want to change my life, I need to change , I must to be change.
我要改变我的生活状态,需要改变,必须要改变
感觉像我在读一首诗。This is very good! I hope you feel less stressed out now! I edited this to be more like a poem because it sounds so poetic. :) 加油!
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