hi, could you correct this writing for me? I work in a housing development company, so here we plan, built and promote to sell new houses. One day, an elderly woman cames to the office asking for information, she looked simple, she was wearing dirty clothes, old slippers, pinny, she seemed quite sunny and sweated. Hi, I want a house! – she said. Valuably, the seller attended her very well, without discrimitation, but inside nobody though in the next episode just for her look. After the explanation of the project, the women said that she had a commercial module in the Oriental Market and she wanted two big houses for her daughters. Incredibly she carried U$ 10,000.00 in her pocket while she had arrived by public bus, then she went to the bank to complete the price and make the transference because she bougth the two biggest houses. But this is not all, until today the woman has been the most educated, polite and friendly customer that we ever had, even more than bussinessman and managers that we have received.

Learning English. Could you correct this writing for me? Hi, could you correct this writing for me? People often say “Don’t judge a book by its cover.” Describe a time when you misjudged someone based on his or her appearance or when someone misjudge you. Well, this lesson “Don’t judge a book by its cover” isn’t an experience that I have passed directly, but it passed on my job two years ago, and all my co-workers and me learned about it and stll today everybody talks about that story. I work in a housing development company, so here we plan, built and promote to sell new houses. One day, an elderly woman cames to the office asking for information, she looked simple, she was wearing dirty clothes, old slippers, pinny, she seemed quite sunny and sweated. Hi, I want a house! – she said. Valuably, the seller attended her very well, without discrimitation, but inside nobody though in the next episode just for her look. After the explanation of the project, the women said that she had a commercial module in the Oriental Market and she wanted two big houses for her daughters. Incredibly she carried U$ 10,000.00 in her pocket while she had arrived by public bus, then she went to the bank to complete the price and make the transference because she bougth the two biggest houses. But this is not all, until today the woman has been the most educated, polite and friendly customer that we ever had, even more than bussinessman and managers that we have received. For us, she is the best example that “The cover is nothing”.

could someone to correct this text please? I am learning english To lend money or being a bailsman is not a good practice, not at all. First, there is a good bible proverb where it’s clear about this topic. We have to learn to solve our problems and life with our own tools and resources. We don’t have to hope in others resources. But, should I lend money to a friend? I’m agree on lending money to a friend, but I would do only in very particular situations, such as a real emergency with his/her health or food, or we can help together one of his close family members, I could help him in those cases because that’s the value of the friendship, to support each other in good times and bad. Such as a recommendation, if suddenly we have a circumstance needing someone borrow us any amount of money, pay it immediately, as a priority, be grateful of that and don’t do it a frequently practice.

Learning English. - Please, I need help someone correct me this reading. To lend money or being a bailsman is not a good practice, not at all. First, there is a good bible proverb where it’s clear about this topic. We have to learn to solve our problems and life with our own tools and resources. We don’t have to hope in others resources. But, should I lend money to a friend? I’m agree on lending money to a friend, but I would do only in very particular situations, such as a real emergency with his/her health or food, or we can help together one of his close family members, I could help him in those cases because that’s the value of the friendship, to support each other in good times and bad. Such as a recommendation, if suddenly we have a circumstance needing someone borrow us any amount of money, pay it immediately, as a priority, be grateful of that and don’t do it a frequently practice.

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Please, I need someone to correct this: I’m agree to lend money to a friend just in very particular situations, as a real emergency allied with his/her health or food, or to help together one of his close family member, I could help him in those case because that’s the importance of the friendship, to support each other in bad and good moments.