could someone to correct this text please? I am learning english
To lend money or being a bailsman is not a good practice, not at all. First, there is a good bible proverb where it’s clear about this topic. We have to learn to solve our problems and life with our own tools and resources. We don’t have to hope in others resources.

But, should I lend money to a friend? I’m agree on lending money to a friend, but I would do only in very particular situations, such as a real emergency with his/her health or food, or we can help together one of his close family members, I could help him in those cases because that’s the value of the friendship, to support each other in good times and bad.

Such as a recommendation, if suddenly we have a circumstance needing someone borrow us any amount of money, pay it immediately, as a priority, be grateful of that and don’t do it a frequently practice.

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could someone to correct this text please? I am learning english
To lend money or being a bailsman is not a good practice, not at all. First, there is a good bible proverb where it’s clear about this topic. We have to learn to solve our problems and life with our own tools and resources. We don’t have to hope in others resources.

But, should I lend money to a friend? I’m agree on lending money to a friend, but I would do only in very particular situations, such as a real emergency with his/her health or food, or we can help together one of his close family members, I could help him in those cases because that’s the value of the friendship, to support each other in good times and bad.

Such as a recommendation, if suddenly we have a circumstance needing someone borrow us any amount of money, pay it immediately, as a priority, be grateful of that and don’t do it a frequently practice.

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To lend money or being a bailsman is not a good practice. First, there is a good bible proverb where it’s clear about this topic.[Are you quoting the bible? If so, use quotes where you are] "We have to learn to solve our problems and life with our own tools and resources." We don’t have to hope in others resources.

But, should I lend money to a friend? I agree on lending money to a friend but only in  certain situations such as a real emergency with his/her health, for food, or to help their close family members. Because I value the friendship, supporting each other in good and bad times, such as these, is important to me.

However as a recommendation, if sudden circumstances do arise where a loan is needed, repay it promptly and graciously. [Avoid borrowing money frequently from friends as it is disrespectful and rude.]--Better sentence.

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