This means that it is wrong and This is what you should put.

My first gymnasium experience

I went to the gymnasium today. It is my first time to a gym. I felt extremely nervous before I went there. I had to persuade myself to step out of my house and go there. I am a little afraid of that place, to be honest. But deep inside I know this kind of emotion is totally unnessessary unnecessary . I know nobody is going to laugh at me but I am still ashamed of my thin body.
But after an hour of excercise  exercise, I felt good. All the sweat and the energy made me feel like a new person. I felt happy and excited. Strangely, although i I spend spent  so much energy in there, i I felt i I have  had more power energy to accomplish more things. All these feelings, physical and emotional, make me feel comfortable.
I hope one day i I would will love it and i I don't mean to be that kind of muscular guy. I just want to be healthy and live a happy life.

Great Job Zhxiaofa!  Just remember to use a capital I :-D

It is....FORBIDDEN! haha :-)

Triple confirmation haha. :-)

EX 1 I would say "I can't speak Arabic" because of Ben's reason. EX 2 I would say "learning a language can be a real challenge" because it is something I have had experience in doing and am still doing now. Also like Ben said, its a fact. I would say "learning a language could be a real challenge" if I was preparing to learn a language in the future or if I thought I might not be prepared. :-)

Saying a review class is fine but I would say revision class or prep class. :-)

No one who is intelligent is willing to leave London. :-)

Number 2 is correct my friend :-)

(IELTS) Letter - Applying letter for the 'social events’ organiser' position

Assignment: You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events’ organiser.

Write a letter to the Training Organiser
- expressing your interest in the role
- requesting more information about it
- explaining what experience you have


Dear Sir or Madam,

I am one of the trainees under your marketing course next month. I have just read the notification from your company and I found the social events’ organizer position particularly appealing.

I wonder if you could share with me some more details on the job description. A briefing on what would needed to be done and the event’s location would be helpful. From the programme schedule I got, it seems that the event is going to be held at 1:00 PM on Saturday. But I am not really sure whether it would be held on every Saturday during our training or any particular Saturday.

As you can see from my attached CV, I have experience in organizing similar events before. My specialty is stage setting and sound coordination, but my experience also includes administrating one social event for university graduates in Ho Chi Minh City, from start to finish.

If you find my skill and experience suitable for the position, please contact me via this e-mail address so that we may discuss further. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,
Quan.

"A briefing on what needed to be done" is great but I would say "A briefing on what would need to be done"

Great Job Quan!