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- 'I still don't know how much pizza I'll need' 'I still don't know how much pizza I'll need' '필요할 아직도 피자를 얼만큼 몰라요'. Is that the correct use of 얼만큼 or should it be 얼마나? Also, I'm still getting used to Korean sentence order and choosing the right forms so please correct anything else if it's wrong.October 3, 201520
About a mobile phone.
Actually, it was my homework and I decided to place this text to check if everything is ok with grammar.
I remember the time when mobiles were the symbol of prosperity because only very wealthy people could afford to possess them. Now, times have changed and almost everybody has a mobile phone. But is it a great invention? I think it has both advantages and disadvantages.
The first and main advantage is that you have a phone on hand wherever the network exists. It makes people free and confident. For example, one can make a call to the police, ambulance service or fire brigade as fast as possible. That is very valuable, particularly where there are no any wired phones.
Secondly, another advantage of a mobile phone is that you don't need to memorise a lot of phone numbers. Every mobile has its storage for phone numbers.
The third advantage of a mobile phone is that you can see who is calling you and then have the choice to answer it or not.
There are also some disadvantages of mobiles.
Firstly, mobiles could cause road accidents because they could divert the attention of drivers.
Secondly, mobiles could cause addiction. I think a lot of people can't escape the desire to talk on a mobile whenever they have any free time.
Thirdly, I think another disadvantages of mobile phones is that a lot of young people are passionate about texting messages. It may substitute real communication.
In conclusion, I'd say despite of all of the disadvantages, a mobile phone is a really amazing thing.Nice job :)
0 votedMay 6, 20150Rescued After Spending 66 Days Adrift
USA Coast Guard announced that they had located a sailor who dissappeared two months ago. The sailor, who has been identified as Louis Jordan, was evacuated by helicopter from a ship with a German flag, which rescued him at Hatteras Cape. According to his family, he had survived by capturing fish with his own hands and drinking rain water.
Louis' father has shown his gratitude to the Houston Express' captain. Krystyn Pecora has pointed out that the disappearance details are still unkonwn, but she has been clear that there is no reason to doubt about his story.
Ryan Doss, non-commissioned officer, explained that the sailboat broke his mast and overturned, but he has no idea when it happened or how long the sailboat was in that position. It seems that the German ship found Louis sitting in the hull.
Louis had been living on his sailboat at Plantation Marina Bucksport in Conway, South Caroline, since January when he told to his family that he was sailing in the open oceans.0 votedApril 4, 20151Where to Live -- in the City or in the Countryside
Cities have been becoming more and more crowded while the living environment in countryside has been getting better and better. Obviously, people prefer to stay in the countryside.
On the one hand, there are many problems with living in cities such as traffic jams and air pollution. As far as pollution is concerned, it's getting worse. What's more, fierce competition and the enrollment issue are both pushing people who have suffered a lot from the city to the countryside.
On the other hand, the suburbanization of the countryside has brought a variety of family machines to ordinary people. Families in the countryside have washing machines, air conditioning and refrigerators. All of these machines approve that the decoration in countryside is as well as civil houses. In addition, shops and entertainment facilities have covered roads inexorably in the countryside. It is all of these aspects that show that people's living standards have been greatly improved in the countryside.
The superiority of living in big cities has gradually disappeared, on the contrary, staying at countryside brings forth convenience. So then, why don't we choose to live in the countryside?I wasn't sure what you were trying to say here sorry. Do you mean that houses in the countryside are just as advanced as civil houses?
Machines is perfectly fine to use but 'appliances' sounds more natural.
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