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Where to Live -- in the City or in the Countryside Cities have been becoming more and more crowded while living environment in countryside is getting better and better. Obviously, people prefer to stay at countryside. On the one hand, there are many problems of live in cities such as traffic jam and air pollution. As far as we can concern, it's getting worse. What's more, fierce competition and the enrollment issue both are pushing people who has suffered a lot from city to countryside. On the other hand, the suburbanization of countryside has brought various of family machines to ordinary people. Families in countryside have washer machines, air conditioners and refrigerators. All these machines approve that the decoration in countryside is as well as civil houses. In addition, shops and entertainment facilities have covered roads inexorably in countryside. It is all that aspects that show that people's living standard has been greatly improved in countryside. The superiority of living in big cities has gradually disappeared, on the contract, staying at countryside brings forth convenience. Then, why don't we choose to live in countryside?

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Where to Live -- in the City or in the Countryside

Cities have been becoming more and more crowded while the living environment in countryside has been getting better and better. Obviously, people prefer to stay in the countryside.
On the one hand, there are many problems with living in cities such as traffic jams and air pollution. As far as pollution is concerned, it's getting worse. What's more, fierce competition and the enrollment issue are both pushing people who have suffered a lot from the city to the countryside.
On the other hand, the suburbanization of the countryside has brought a variety of family machines to ordinary people. Families in the countryside have washing machines, air conditioning and refrigerators. All of these machines approve that the decoration in countryside is as well as civil houses. In addition, shops and entertainment facilities have covered roads inexorably in the countryside. It is all of these aspects that show that people's living standards have been greatly improved in the countryside.
The superiority of living in big cities has gradually disappeared, on the contrary, staying at countryside brings forth convenience. So then, why don't we choose to live in the countryside?

 

I wasn't sure what you were trying to say here sorry. Do you mean that houses in the countryside are just as advanced as civil houses? 


Machines is perfectly fine to use but 'appliances' sounds more natural.



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