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I come from China. You can call me Amy. I am civil Engineer. I love New Zealand, I want to live there.I l fancy traveling.English is a international language. So, I must master Enlish. I am here to look for a language partner to practice my English and help other people who want to learn Chinese. My Chinese is very good, even though I don't have experience of teaching Chinese in school, but I believe my Chinese is better than many Chinese teachers.
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  • Corrected

    备忘录的一部分

    我们正面临着一个独特的特殊情况:任职于那些拥有丰富资产的公司的管理人员通常只持有自己公司一小部分的公司股票,所以他们对被收购不感兴趣。为了保护自己的特权,他们在企业公司里构建“长城”,试图吓退国内、外资金的入侵。虽然这些“城墙”是可能被穿透,但是大多数国内、外企业都不愿意向目标公司发动“不友好”的收购。然而,只要并购战斗开始,它就能让股东们收益颇丰。 (此句的意思是:只要进行并购,不管成功与否,就能让股东们收益颇丰。这是有问题的,让人无法理解。)

    通常情况下,如果目标公司认为自己受到严重威胁,那它会寻求更友好的企业(一般被称之为“白衣骑士”)。而这位“白衣骑士”会提出更高的收购价,从而使有意收购该目标公司的国内、外企业开始一场竞购战。目标公司还可能会尝试从收购方手中回购自己的股票,如果失败的话,那目标公司可能提前进行清算。 


    我们的论点是:我们可以通过采取大头的收购方式来寸获得相当丰厚的利润,并尝试图控制目标公司的命运。我们能: 
    a)尝试图说服目标公司的服管理层,对企业目标公司进行清算或将目标公司出售公司给“白衣骑士”。 

    b)发动代理权争夺战 
    c)进行要约收购 
    和/或 
    d)卖回给向目标公司售回我们拥有的头寸

     

    (文章没有提供背景信息,导致读者无法准确理解作者的意图。这给修改文章增加了难度。比如,我就有以下两点不明之处:
    1. “然而,只要并购战斗开始,它就能让股东们收益颇丰”,“然而”一词有转折之意,但我完全看不出此句与前文有此逻辑关系。“不愿意收购”表明的是没有收购意图,怎么“然而”之后就成了“让股东们收益颇丰”呢?
    2. 第二段最后一句,“那目标公司可能提前进行清算”与第三段a)“对企业进行清算”,这两个句子矛盾。
    还有一点需要注意:对一个事物的称呼在一篇文章中应始终如一,不能这里是“目标公司”,那里又成了“企业”。会让读者不知道你说的是谁,导致不易理解。)

     

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    March 29, 2015
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    Go to Work Every day, I get up in 7:00 am , then eat my breakfast(cooked by myself). At 8:30 am, I set off. I go down the stairs onto the first floor, that will take me about two minutes as I live in the six floor and there is no elevator in the apartment. I go to work by riding bicycle. My bicycle is small, red and light. If I want I can fold it and then carry it to my home, but usually I only put it under the stair in the first floor. As I have lost two bicycles, which were stole maybe by the same thief. So,now, I always lock my bicycle. I take my bicycle, open the un-theft door, go out, then I mount it, start riding.I go through about five blocks, then a bridge, and another three blocks, arrive my destination, my company, which is about 6 kilometers away from my home. I put the bicycle near the wall outside the company building and lock it. I go inside the front door, into the elevator, up to 11th floor, sit at my desk inside my cube. That is how I go to work.
    March 26, 2015
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    过得好吗?

    大家好。我上次在这里写文章已经差不多是两年以前的事了。

    这两年发生了很多事儿。

    我去年回美国读完了大学。以前我在北京留学过一年。今年五月我终于大学毕业了。毕业后我回我的家乡丹佛过了几个月。八月底我来了韩国。我在这里上韩语课(这里我不明白,你是说你在上教韩语的课还是在上用韩语教授的课?),并打算一年后在这里上硕士生。我觉得学习语言很好玩儿,所以就选择再学习另外一种语言!

    我发现中文和韩文有很多相同的地方,当然,不像的更多。比如说中文的语法特别简单,开始学习韩语后才意识到这一点。中文的动词,形容词什么的都是一个形式,每个情况都一样。韩语却不那么容易。韩语当中词形变化挺多的,要看情况使用。比如,对比你老的人用敬语,对朋友们则一样的句子却用另外一种形式。这一点让我特别糊涂!一年之内我能达到足够上硕士生的语言水平吗?这一点我也不太清楚。我的研究项目其实是关于中国的,所以除了用韩语教授的课程以外,还会有些用中文来教的课。因此我要边学习韩语边继续提高我的汉语水平。很不容易的事。朋友们有什么推荐?

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    March 26, 2015
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