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    June 29, 2015
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    请客吃饭

    如果我想请朋友吃饭,我一般会邀请他们来我家吃一顿我亲手做的饭,因为我觉得邀请朋友出去吃饭是比较没有人情味的,而且有谁要买单的问题必须被解决。另一个原因就是带三个孩子去餐厅吃饭不是一个我可以享受承受的事情!但是我家乡的习惯是相反的,在那里人一般会一起出去吃饭,至少我父母和他们的朋友都是这样子。人通常会各付各的,但是有的时候可以是一个人买单,要看情况。当朋友来你自己的城市旅行的时候,东道主常常会请客。另一个情况就是长辈跟晚辈一起出去吃饭时,长辈一般会请客。

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    June 29, 2015
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    May 1, 2015
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  • Commented

    It is impossible to learn mandarin Chinese without listening the sound. Because the speaking and writing is totally seperated in chinse. The learners  have to practice speaking.

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    April 20, 2015
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  • Answered
    在中国,这个很难定义,有的叫小区,有的叫公寓,有的叫公馆,有的叫园林,many kinds of names.
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    April 20, 2015
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    To qmmayer

    如果修改的话,就要动整个句子结构,可以改成这样,“他把手枪平放在手掌上,伸到我面前,向我展示,我看了很久”,其他中国人没有推荐修改的原因可能是因为,他们理解了这个句子,认为这是可理解的,改动的话,变化太大了。所以就没有修改。这也是我在我的作文No.10 Proposal 中提出建议一样,我建议语言伙伴可以用语言伙伴的主要意思进行改编文章,这样我们就可以看到我们的差异,最终消灭差异,达到提高语言水平的目的。http://www.italki.com/entry/542075,这是链接。

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    April 17, 2015
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    April 16, 2015
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    April 15, 2015
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    To qmmayer He took out the gun and gave it too me, and I looked for a long time. ___this is not what he wanted to tell. He put the gun in the palm of his hand to show me, and I looked for a long time. 他把枪拿出来,平放在手掌上,伸到我面前向我展示。 He revealed the gun to me in the palm of his hand, I wish this picture below could help you to understand this.
    April 14, 2015
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    April 12, 2015
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