Friends are the gold of life

Everyone needs to have friends. Some people tend to have a small group of friends others tend to have a large group. In my opinion, it is good to have some close friends who we can find them around us in happy and sad times.

I agree!

1) When using everyone the verb that comes next to it needs an "s" at the end. Example, Everyone wants.

2) You don't need to use "them" again, you can use it if you want but it's not necessary.

Making Things Tougher Than They Really Are

What are you doing (do you do) when is something  important is in front of you? Are you thinking about it? Are you preparing? Or do you just jump into it and do it? I’m more of a thinker and that’s my curse.

I had to perform an one-way job interview. I had prepared, shaved, sat down and connected to the Internet. All the things were (went) wrong, I connecting to the application became impossible and the borrowed iPad (the iPad I borrowed) was making me mad. I didn’t know that that  iPad  was omitting some important information, but it does did. I had to combine the PC and the iPad (because of the camera) to make it working. I finally did it and all the things were working. But I was stressed out a lot. I wanted things working smooth and they weren’t.

I was finally so tired so I just sat down, read the first question: “Why have you chosen this project?How can you contribute to it?” and I started thinking. I was supposed to make a 30 seconds video. I had prepared it and started recording. First recording was terrible, second I made a mistake  one was my own error by touching a wrong button. The third attempt wasn’t good enough, but it was my last chance so I submitted it. After an hour of doing things like this, I lost all my energy and wanted to get rid of it as soon as possible.

The moment when I was exhausted and still recording the videos made me realize that I putting so much effort to it isn’t necessary. Then I relaxed a little, finished it and submitted it. Now I know, that I can be more influential while being relaxed and doing it more casual.

Pavel

Hi Pavel! Yeah I know the feeling of things going totally wrong!  But I’m glad you were able to relax and get things done!
Here are some observations:

1) The first question is in the present tense because it’s a general question you are asking the readers.
2) And in general just make sure you use the verbs in the right tense, for example use verbs in the past when talking about past experiences. But overall, you did well!

My aunt Alicia dead (died) today.

Now I’m writing about her presence in my heart.
Using English to express my love and my gratitude with (for) her.
She was ninety eight years old. Twenty days ago she go (went) to her bed.
She didn’t need any disease to go to a new grade of energy, to a new level of light.
Here I’m looking for the most beautiful words to express my love and my gratitude.
I’m finding the same situation in English than in Spanish: Hearts have experiencies (experiences)that no word can containt. I love you aunt. You are welcome to (in) my heart forever.

Don't complain, just do it

People (are) use to complaining of a lot of things (about the job, the couple (their partner), the friends, etcetera). Then you ask to them why don't they do something to change the situation, people only make up any excuses to do nothing. I think that people are afraid of the change. They don't like their currently job, but they can't stand don't (not) knowing about the future.
I think in the life you have to take a risk if you want that something (to) changes. I can’t assure You that You will have success. But I assure you that If you have tried you’ll fell (feel) fulfilled.

Please correct the text if I made some mistakes.

Thanks!

I agree! People should be brave to make changes in their life!

I want to learn to speak english fluently and correctly and also conpremhence (comprehend) more about the language an

        Some say that learning a lenguage language is not something that you learn an overnight, I'm aware about this situation so this is the reason which that I'm here because I want to learn and practise practice with natives speakers and enhence enhance the language. I've also think that the practice is the best way to learn.

Good!

Here are some tips:

1. Remember when you have two verbs in a row in the present tense to use "to" to connect them, example.   I <em>want</em> to <em>learn</em>...

2. And just becareful with you spelling :D

Helping Others Makes Me Happy

       We are always faced with difficulties in life, and we often can't deal with it by ourselves. So we ask others for help. As the same (In the same way),we should give other people a hand when someone (is) in needs. Last week, my classmate Jane, hurt her hand, and she (needed to) must clean the classroom on that day.When I known (found that out) that, I helped her finish it.Though I was late for home, I felt very happy. Everyone ought to help others who are in difficult(y). Then, not only other people (will be happy) but also we will be happy.

Tips:

1) "In the same way" is a better and more common expresion than "As the same"

And I also agree service helping others makes us really happy! We should always look for ways to serve others. :D

Do What I Want to Do

This summer vacation, I want to go on a trip myself. I have planned it for a long time, but I have never do (done) it until now. Several month later, I will graduate from the university. So I decided to do what I want to.