Helping Others Makes Me Happy

       We are always faced with difficulties in life, and we often can't deal with it by ourselves. So we ask others for help. As the same (In the same way),we should give other people a hand when someone (is) in needs. Last week, my classmate Jane, hurt her hand, and she (needed to) must clean the classroom on that day.When I known (found that out) that, I helped her finish it.Though I was late for home, I felt very happy. Everyone ought to help others who are in difficult(y). Then, not only other people (will be happy) but also we will be happy.

Tips:

1) "In the same way" is a better and more common expresion than "As the same"

And I also agree service helping others makes us really happy! We should always look for ways to serve others. :D