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    I agree with you.  I think it depends on how people use money.  Money can be used for good like Bill Gates does, or for bad.

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    March 23, 2015
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    Overseas Banking Consulting

    This is Waqas Khan from Pakistan. I am giving my services to a Multi National Company who basically provide overseas banking consultancy to locals of other countries like;
    If you used bank's product and couldn't repaid to them so what steps can bank stand against you
    If you really wants to repay to the bank and do not want to pay entire outstanding; not in position to pay in a shot or else you want a huge waiver and discount facility so we here to provide these all services also negotiate with the concerned banks in UAE and try to get the same facilities.
    In case bank filled a Police case against you then we protect you if we involved.
    further quires can be asked and here to resolve that queries.
    Thanks & Regards,
    Waqas Khan

     

    This is Waqas Khan from Pakistan. I working for ( am giving my services to) a multi national company which (who) provideS overseas banking consultancy to locals of other countries. ---- Do you mean expats? provides banking consultancy to expats or just to people in other countries. I'm not certain who you provide service to.
    It seems like your service is to help people who have banking problems. ---- Is it problems in Pakistan... later you mention UAE... So the big question isn't here... Borrow money from what bank. But nice complex sentences. Keep up the good work.
    If you borrowed money from a bank and can't repaid them, we can tell you what steps the bank can take against you.
    If you really want to repay the bank but do not want to repay entire amount,
    you aren't in the position to pay it all at once,
    or else you want a huge waiver or discount,
    we can provide all these services.
    We also also can negotiate with banks in UAE and try to get the same services.
    If the bank filed a Police case against you, then we protect you if we are involved.
    If you have any questions, please contact us.
    Thanks & Regards,
    Waqas Khan

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    March 23, 2015
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    morning in the kindergarten

    I took my son in the kindergarten.
    I hardly had to give him a hand with changing his clothes. He took off his coat alone, I only helped him to take off his shoes.
    We wanted to see what is for lunch, but it wasn't printed out yet.
    Then, we said goodbye to each other in the door.
    I gave him two pecks.
    The kindergarten teacher has already been waiting for him.

     

    Good job....   

     

    Off to kindgergarten or At kindergardten

     

    I took my son to the kindergarten.
    I hardly had to help him with changing his clothes. He took off his coat alone, I only helped him to take off his shoes.
    We wanted to see what was for lunch, but it wasn't printed out yet.
    Then, we said goodbye to each other at the door.
    I gave him two pecks.
    The kindergarten teacher was waiting for him.

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    March 23, 2015
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    March 16, 2015
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    a new experience

    I've been living in Valencia for 5 months and to be honest I feel like a fish out of water. It is a mindblowing city, that's for sure, but I feel a little bit lonely. I hardly know anyone for the time being and I find really hard to get to know new people, especially when I am not attending to any social environment.

    Would you mind correcting this entry? Thanks in advance

     

    Nice job.  Correct use of idioms too!

    I've been living in Valencia for 5 months *but to be honest I feel like a fish out of water. -- I changed and to but
    It is a *mind blowing city, that's for sure, but I feel a little bit lonely. --- mind blowing usually two words
    I hardly know anyone for the time being and I find * it really hard to get to know new people, especially when * I’m not attending (* to ) any social (*environment ) events. ---- added it (find it really hard); also changed I am to I'm since you style is informal; deleted to after attending... attending and attending to aren't the same.

     

    definations:

    attend to - get down to; pay attention to; take seriously;
    attend:
    a. To be present at: attended the lecture.
    b. To go regularly to: attended class every Tuesday and Thursday.

     

    Again, excellent job!

     

    Jamie

     

     

     

     

     

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    March 15, 2015
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