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a new experience
I've been living in Valencia for 5 months and to be honest I feel like a fish out of water. It is a mindblowing city, that's for sure, but I feel a little bit lonely. I hardly know anyone for the time being and I find really hard to get to know new people, especially when I am not attending to any social environment.
Would you mind correcting this entry? Thanks in advance
Nice job. Correct use of idioms too!
I've been living in Valencia for 5 months *but to be honest I feel like a fish out of water. -- I changed and to but
It is a *mind blowing city, that's for sure, but I feel a little bit lonely. --- mind blowing usually two words
I hardly know anyone for the time being and I find * it really hard to get to know new people, especially when * I’m not attending (* to ) any social (*environment ) events. ---- added it (find it really hard); also changed I am to I'm since you style is informal; deleted to after attending... attending and attending to aren't the same.
definations:
attend to - get down to; pay attention to; take seriously;
attend:
a. To be present at: attended the lecture.
b. To go regularly to: attended class every Tuesday and Thursday.
Again, excellent job!
Jamie
a new experience
I've been living in Valencia for 5 months and to be honest/frankly/honestly I feel rather like a fish out of water. It is a mindblowing city, that's for sure, but I feel a little bit lonely. I hardly know anyone for the time being/sofar ('for the time being' seems a little out of place) and I find it really hard to get to know new people, especially when I am not attending to taking part in any social activities (or: 'when I have no social outlets') environment.
Would you mind correcting this entry? Thanks in advance
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