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- help friends with writting task :) Hello friends. I need to practice my writing ability for a test, and I would like you to help me to correct certain errors in the text. Feel free to make any observation :) thanks. The instructions are attached in the picture. The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clear energy. There are several benefits and disadvantages for use nuclear technology. I am going to extend my agree and disagree. I agree in this particular cases. The nuclear power is other alternative for energy use. We are watching the same energy like a oil, gas etc. Other case is the nuclear power is cheaper than other kind of energy conventional such as petroleum and eolian energy. With this energy power, it is useful for open news roads in mountains similar to dynamite. Use nuclear power as a weapon to protect the nation and maintain the world peace even though the dialog is the best way. I disagree in this cases. Utilize this energy as a weapon to destroy humans lives. Use this energy with purpose to damage something for example a city with humans. Research this kind of energy spent a lot of time and resources, and nuclear energy effort is sometimes not good constable. In general, all kinds of technologies has a double purpose. A good use of nuclear power abroad new places to research, and it usually become less cost and it is more effective than older energy. Other people allow to make more and deep studies about its use. In other hand, The energy nuclear is very strong that it can use as a weapon to destroy a big places, cities and humans lives. One example of nation working with this field is North Korea.
July 1, 201530 - writting taks 1B graph radio and television :) Hello friends. I need to practice my writing ability for a test, and I would like that you help me to correct certain errors in the text, Feel free to make any observation :) thanks. the instructions are attached in the picture. The report shows radio and television audiences in UK throughout the day in 1992. The time that is selected was the October - December 1992: The percentage covered by UK population is over 4 years old. The percentage of audience work between 0% and 50%. The time started 6:00 a.m. and finished to 6:00a.m. the next day. The Radio has advantage audience among television between 6:00 a.m. to 1 p.m. and the television grew audience between 1p.m. to 3 a.m. with highest level with 45% at 8 p.m. Between 3:00 a.m. to 6:00 a.m. almost is it the same radio and television. We can notice the audience in United Kingdom had the radio with significant more audience than television between 6:00 a.m. and 1:00 p.m.. Later the television had advantage between 1:00 p.m. to 3:00 p.m. In the period of 3:00 a.m. to 6:00 a.m. the television and radio were almost the same level of audience.
June 23, 201520 writting taks 1 chart :)
Hello friends. I need to practice my writing ability for a test, and I would like that you help me to correct certain errors in the text, Feel free to make any observation :) thanks. the instructions are attached in the picture.
As a chart show the numbers of students ( men and women in thousands) studying further education in three periods between 1970/1971, 1980/1981and 1990/1991 in Britain.
First , part- time education in 1970/71 with 100 and 1980/81 with 170 there were more male students attending further education than women in the same period. In the third period 1990/91 the women leading attending with 1250.
Second, Full-time education, the same tendency as part-time. Men leading the two first periods, and woman leading the third.
Finally, We can consider both full and part time education at the beginning of 1970 and 1980 more men attending to further school. In 1990, the opportunity to include women were increasing considerably more than men.fixed
This chart shows the numbers of students (men and women, in thousands) studying further education in three periods between 1970/1971, 1980/1981 and 1990/1991 in Britain.
First, full-time education: In the first period: In 1970/81, men were higher with 100,000. Woman are leading in 1980/81, and they in 1990/91 almost equal for men around 22,000.
Second, part-time education: Men were leading in 1970/71, and they were slightly ahead in 1980/81, while women were leading in 1990/91.
The combined full and part-time students were higher for men in 1970, approximately equal for men and women in 1980, and higher for women in 1990.
0 votedJune 15, 20150- writting taks 1 chart :) Hello friends. I need to practice my writing ability for a test, and I would like that you help me to correct certain errors in the text, Feel free to make any observation :) thanks. the instructions are attached in the picture. As a chart show the numbers of students ( men and women in thousands) studying further education in three periods between 1970/1971, 1980/1981and 1990/1991 in Britain. First , part- time education in 1970/71 with 100 and 1980/81 with 170 there were more male students attending further education than women in the same period. In the third period 1990/91 the women leading attending with 1250. Second, Full-time education, the same tendency as part-time. Men leading the two first periods, and woman leading the third. Finally, We can consider both full and part time education at the beginning of 1970 and 1980 more men attending to further school. In 1990, the opportunity to include women were increasing considerably more than men.
June 14, 201580 Written practice
Hi friends. I need practice my writting hability for a test, and I hope that you help me thanks. Here is the instructions.
You recently stayed at the Best Holiday Hotel. However, many of the promises made in the advert did not match the reality of the hotel.
There were a number of problems with the accommodation and some of the excursions offered were not available. Look at the advertisement for the hotel below and write a letter asking the manager for some kind of compensation to make up for the inconveniences you experienced.
Begin your letter by addressing it to the Manager, Ms. Olivia Plutz. You do not have to write any addresses. End your letter correctly and sign it.
Ms. Olivia Plutz.
Manager of best holiday hotel
Dear Ms. Olivia Pluz.
I hope that you are ok now. I am writing this letter to you about many promises that you made and did not match with the reality of the hotel. As an I list as following:
*We spent a lot of time to begin each excursion because There were a lot of people in line on each excursion.
*When we were arrived to the excursion many people leave the excursion because it was closed!!!.
For this in others details, if it possible to will get a some kind compensation for the inconvenience experience. Hopefully to read good news.
Respectfully yours.
_______________________
Gabriel Ramirezcorrected (thanks james)
Ms. Olivia Plutz.
Manager of best holiday hotelDear Ms. Olivia Pluz.
I am writing this letter to you about many promises that were made in the advertisment and did not match my experience at the hotel.
*We wasted a lot of time at the beginning each excursion standing in long lines.
*When we arrived to one of the excursions we couldn't go and see it because it was closed. Yet I paid for this in my hotel bill!!
Because of these reasons, we are asking that you refund 20% of our bill. I hope to hear from you very soon.
Respectfully yours.
_______________________
Gabriel Ramirez0 votedMay 27, 20151- Written practice Hi friends. I need practice my writting hability for a test, and I hope that you help me thanks. Here is the instructions. You recently stayed at the Best Holiday Hotel. However, many of the promises made in the advert did not match the reality of the hotel. There were a number of problems with the accommodation and some of the excursions offered were not available. Look at the advertisement for the hotel below and write a letter asking the manager for some kind of compensation to make up for the inconveniences you experienced. Begin your letter by addressing it to the Manager, Ms. Olivia Plutz. You do not have to write any addresses. End your letter correctly and sign it. Ms. Olivia Plutz. Manager of best holiday hotel Dear Ms. Olivia Pluz. I hope that you are ok now. I am writing this letter to you about many promises that you made and did not match with the reality of the hotel. As an I list as following: *We spent a lot of time to begin each excursion because There were a lot of people in line on each excursion. *When we were arrived to the excursion many people leave the excursion because it was closed!!!. For this in others details, if it possible to will get a some kind compensation for the inconvenience experience. Hopefully to read good news. Respectfully yours. _______________________ Gabriel Ramirez
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