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writting taks 1B graph radio and television :) Hello friends. I need to practice my writing ability for a test, and I would like that you help me to correct certain errors in the text, Feel free to make any observation :) thanks. the instructions are attached in the picture. The report shows radio and television audiences in UK throughout the day in 1992. The time that is selected was the October - December 1992: The percentage covered by UK population is over 4 years old. The percentage of audience work between 0% and 50%. The time started 6:00 a.m. and finished to 6:00a.m. the next day. The Radio has advantage audience among television between 6:00 a.m. to 1 p.m. and the television grew audience between 1p.m. to 3 a.m. with highest level with 45% at 8 p.m. Between 3:00 a.m. to 6:00 a.m. almost is it the same radio and television. We can notice the audience in United Kingdom had the radio with significant more audience than television between 6:00 a.m. and 1:00 p.m.. Later the television had advantage between 1:00 p.m. to 3:00 p.m. In the period of 3:00 a.m. to 6:00 a.m. the television and radio were almost the same level of audience.

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writting taks 1B graph radio and television :)

Hello friends. I need to practice my writing ability for a test, and I would like that you to help me to correct certain errors in the text. Feel free to make any observation :) thanks. The instructions are attached in the picture.

The report shows radio and television audiences in UK throughout the day in 1992.

The period that was selected was the October - December 1992. The percentage audience covered is the UK population over 4 years old. The percentage range of the audience work is between 0% and 50%. The time started at 6:00 a.m. and finished at 6:00a.m. the next day.

The Radio has advantage a bigger audience among than television between 6:00 a.m. and 1 p.m. and The television audience grows between 1p.m. and 3 a.m. with the highest level reaching 45% at 8 p.m.

Between 3:00 a.m. and 6:00 a.m. it is almost the same audience level for radio and television.

We can notice the audience in United Kingdom had the radio with significant more audience than television between 6:00 a.m. and 1:00 p.m. Later the television had the advantage between 1:00 p.m. to 3:00 p.m. In the period of 3:00 a.m. to 6:00 a.m. the television and radio almost had the same level of audience.

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