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My father is so loud!!
Right now I'm trying to write an essay. I'm collecting ideas and reading some information, but in the next room my dad is talking on the phone about work. I don't have any problem with that, but his voice is just too loud!! I can hear him clearly from my room! I'm getting stressed because I can't focus on what I'm reading! That is the reason I am writing (or "wrote") this entry...Your writing is great! Sometimes it is acceptable to put a semi colon before "but" and a comma afterwards—this is considered "old fashioned" now. Punctuation is always changing!
0 votedAugust 16, 20171A little of about me
Now I live in Lima, the capital of Peru, but I was born in Puno. Puno is a little city of in my country and it have has a beautiful landscape.(these are two different thoughts so I would probably separate into two sentences) It also has a variety of cultures ,colors, and typical dances.It is hard for me say to convey all my thoughts.
Help me for to learn English. See you later.
Nice Job! Keep up the great work!
0 votedAugust 19, 20160Today, I am in (or at) the swimming pool.
Today, in Spain it is very hot. because I have decided to go to the public pool after work. I don't have a private pool, but the public pool is near where i live (or you could say..." I don't have my own pool, but the public pool is close to home."). The pool has a lot of boil? (not sure what you are trying to say there? "Boil is what water does when it is time to throw the pasta in : ) - maybe "boys"?), a bar, and space for children.Keep up the great work!
0 votedAugust 18, 20161Insomnia
I am writing this because I can't sleep. I woke up at 2:36 a.m. and I can't get back to sleep.
For the last four nights, I have had insomnia. I wake up at about 3 a.m. and I am unable to fall back asleep. (I just changed the wording so it wasn't the same as the previous sentence.)
I am very tired during the day.
I'm very worried (or concerned) because at the end of next week I'm going on holiday (or "vacation") with my dog and I need to drive 1500 km. If I can't sleep more than three to four hours per night for the two weeks before my trip, I don't know how I will be able to drive safely. It's just me and my dog, so I will be the only one driving; and I really need this holiday (or "vacation, or "this time away").
I'm very worried. (or concerned)
I really hope you are able to get to sleep. Sounds like you are pretty stressed. Try some "Melatonin" about a half hour before you go to bed. That may help. Or try working out more during the day to cut down on your stress level. The exercise will help with your sleep as well. Lastly, you might need to see a doctor so you can get some help sleeping. Good luck sleeping and have a fun vacaton!0 votedMay 5, 20151i have a problem with English :)
Hi! This is my first note. My friends and I have been learning English since we were ten years old. We continue to learn English, but we can't speak it! :))) What is the problem? Do we just need practice or more help with grammar?
Keep practicing. You will get it! Learning a new language is difficult.
0 votedMay 5, 20150One more time...
The more I write, the more you correct me.
Of course, those who want to learn, learn by being corrected (or "by trial and error").
I got home and there's nothing for me to do, except study, listen to music, and play with my dog; that is the best part! His name is Scott and he is loving and very funny.
Now let's see, I must have written some things wrong. I look forward to learning more, so that I actually feel prepared when I talk with someone in English.I'm not sure I translated exactly how you wanted to say it, but this is one way to write it. You are doing great! Keep it up!
0 votedMay 5, 20150How to travel from Jerusalem to Bethlehem
Please correct me if I'm wrong ...Thank you
The best way to travel from Jerusalem to Bethlehem is by Bus No.231. (Notice that the number of the bus was 21 but it was changed recently) One should go to Arab Bus Station at the Damascus Gate (“Bab el-‘Amoud”) in East Jerusalem. This bus travels to Bethlehem via Beit Jala town. The average trip length is 40 minutes and costs 8 Shekels (2USD). The bus will drop you off at the Bethlehem / Beit Jala intersection (“Bab el-Zkak”), which is 1 km away from Manger Square.
If you need help, you are more than welcome to ask me via Email: [email protected]Just a few small edits that I would make : )
Have a great day!
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