A little of me Now I live in Lima, the capital of Peru but I was born in Puno , Puno is a little city of my country and it have a beautiful landscape , varety of culture ,colors, tipycal dances. Is h

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A little of me Now I live in Lima, the capital of Peru but I was born in Puno , Puno is a little city of my country and it have a beautiful landscape , varety of culture ,colors, tipycal dances. Is hard for me say all my thoughs. Help me for learn english, see you.

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A little about me

Now I live in Lima, the capital of Peru but I was born in Puno. Puno is a small city of my country and it is a beautiful landscape and has a wide variety of culture, colors and typical dances.
It is hard for me to say all my thoughts.
Help me learn English, see you.

A little about me

Currently** I live in Lima, the capital of Peru, but I was born in Puno. Puno is a little city in my country and it has a beautiful landscape, variety of culture, colors, typical dances (what is meant by "typical dances"?).
It is hard for me to say all of my thoughts.
Help me to learn English, see you later.

** Unless you're following a description of a different situation, I wouldn't start off a sentence with "Now." "Currently" could be used in this situation, as a comparison or as an introduction. If you wanted to say "Now" it should have followed a sentence describing a different scenario. For example, if you said first that you were born in Puno, but are "now" living in Lima, that would be acceptable.

A little of about me

Now I live in Lima, the capital of Peru, but I was born in Puno. Puno is a little city of in my country and it have has a beautiful landscape.(these are two different thoughts so I would probably separate into two sentences) It also has a variety of cultures ,colors, and typical dances.

It is hard for me say to convey all my thoughts.

Help me for to learn English. See you later.

Nice Job! Keep up the great work!

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