My 3-year-old son told the first story a story for the first time

In the evening, I asked my son to wash his hands when we got home, but he wouldn't like to.didn't want to, and suddenly said:"I have known  thought of a story today."
I asked curiously：“what's the story?”
"The borer."he answered.
"What kind of borer?"I continued.
Then he thought and said:"Some kids had meals but didn't brush their teeth. Borers went into their mouth and used the drill to drill a cavity on in their mouth, then living  they lived there."
"To live They lived in their teeth?"I asked.
"No,in their mouth."he corrected me immediately .
I knew his he is stubborn ,so I said:"Oh,my god.It's too terrible,isn't it? Did they feel any ache pain?"
"Yes, very ache it hurt a lot."he answered.
"So what should they do?"I asked apprehensively.
He stopped to think it over for a second and said:"They went to see a doctor. The doctor told them to remember to brush their teeth after dinner."
It is was great to hear a story from my little boy. This is was his first time to tell the first time he told a whole story. And use I used the opportunity while I told to tell him to wash his hands or borers will would live in his belly. This time he accepted my advice and washed his hands fast .
A useful story. Wonderful!

How to run that can and keep your legs thin(or slim?)

Some people say that running is an holistic sport, but the fact is that so many people slim(?) their upper part of the body, while many people's upper bodies stay slim,  their legs become more and more thick thicker and thicker. So i write something about that
Reason number1 of for thick legs:
Wrong realization  of  Not moving forward past the center of gravity.( Wrong realization of ahead of center of gravity)
When you are running, you have to take move your center of gravity forward. You can have a try try it yourself: move your center of gravity forward when while you are in a standing position. I believe that most people will become you only moving move the center of gravity of your their upper part of the body - if you still standing in situ, still  it’s not truely taking you are not moving your center of gravity forward. If you do it right, you might want to step forward so that you could take a step to keep your  balance and prevent a tumble yourself from falling----this also the original intention of walking. This problem relates to the lacking of realization of not moving forward past the center of gravity.
You can only will feel more relaxed when you keep moving your center of gravity forward while you are running. If you just only move your upper part of the body with  your arse buttocks still hold held  backward, then every step you run with your center of gravity at the back. It makes you feel very laborsome, will be very strenuous, so no wonder your thighs will become thick, because your legs need a stronger more power to push you to finish the action.
TBC

Hi Echo, here are some corrections.  I think it's great that difficult events in your life are making you stronger and more positive. 

 

lucky

I am always lucky. Today I called to my old friend of from high school. We talked about what are we are up to. I said I am planning to go aboard abroad this summer as a volunteer. He asked me where I plan to go. i told to him Indonesia. He said he adored me because (now he is always swayed by considerations of gain and loss.) After "because" should come the reason he adores you, for example: because of my positive attitude. Because he is "swayed (meaning influenced) by considerations of gain and loss" does not sound like a reason to adore somebody.  Perhaps:  He adored me.  He is always swayed by considerations of gain and loss. I told him the reasons why I decided to do something what I want to do. One thing is that I broke up with my lover, another is that my grandfather is in the hospital. So I think I get have become more mature over the past year. That is why I can firmly decide to do things I like. And He also encouraged me to fighting with everything (Perhaps: to stick up for myself). Yeah, frustration always makes us grow up, to and be more mature, more rational and more competent. Maybe someday you will find (...you are hard work what you want to do all the time) I do not understand. Do you mean:  ...that what you want to do all the time is to work hard?
I ever thanked am thankful for my ex-boyfriend. If not for him, maybe I am would always be a little girl (who is) immersed in love, don’t not knowing what logical or rational is, how to be independent, what rational is and how to live on my own. But now I am not going to don't thank him now.  Because He abandoned me, I walked away out of the shadows by myself without anyone's help. So I should thank myself.
Now I truly like my live life. Its my I'm having the best time since I when was born, and I have a few friends who are have a the same goal. I am lucky that I can make friends with them. Life is full of happiness. Thank god for everything. I will be am getting better and better.

A question

I have been learning learned English for quite a long time, of course i have memorized? learned? recited a lot of  some words, and as I know, some words have the same meaning, such as: important, vital and significant. When my English teacher was teaching me how to write an article, he recommended that I recommanded me to use "significant" or "vital" instead of "important", because these two words are more advanced. So, here's my question: Which kinds of words do you English speakers use in your daily conversations? Advanced like "siginificant" and "vital" or just the basic kind like "important"?
I don't know if i have expressed my question clearly, looking forward to someone to your answers.

 

Your English is clearly quite advanced, which means that you have a wide variety of choices when deciding what to say.  When your teacher told you about advanced words, I think he or she meant that such words are generally taught at an advanced level.  This is because "advanced" words are less common and a beginner can make do without them.  These words are rarely pure synonyms, but rather have different nuances of meaning.  An important decision is not necessarily a vital one, and when I say that vegetables are a significant part of my diet, I don't just mean that they are important, but also that they make up a large portion of what I eat.  When I speak, I don't try to use advanced words, but rather I try to use the best word I can think of to express what I mean.  You can improve this ability by reading the definitions of words in a good English-English dictionary, and also by paying attention to how they are used by native speakers and in texts.  Another way is to simply follow your teacher's suggestion and to do your best to use the words appropriately. 

 

Using advanced words is not vital to communication, but it can bring about significant improvement in your vocabulary, and may prove to be important in the long run. :)

Living two days without Internet

The internet seems to be so important for modern people, especially for the young lived young people who live in the city. Two days ago, the internet system of my college was shut down, and suddenly, the whole school was in a panic. Everybody was looking for something to do because they had no place to use internet. It's unusual seeing so many people on the playground--laughing, talking and jumping. For me, it was so sucked not to be able to play games online with my friends. I didn't want to go out, so I just picked up a book which was put had been on the shelf for a hundred years. About three hours later I felt tired, so I decided to take a walk. I spent one an hour walking around the whole campus which was so ignored by me I would usually ignore. I really found something it interesting in on this campus that I've been hated for such a long time. I felt happy. After the dinner, I finished the book and went to bed early so that and I felt so nice the next day. I also had a good time skating with my bodies buddies for the whole days. But today, I refused to get up after knowing that the reparation of the line line had been repaired, I refused to get up, and watched a movie on the bad bed without having my breakfast. And now, I am writing and and listening to music with on my iPad.

 

Hi Owen - only minor mistakes. Red markings are grammar and word order corrections and blue markings indicate suggestions where a different phrasing would work better.  In any case, it sounds like the internet should break more often...

Hi Ataraxia,  here are some corrections.  Red markings indicate a grammar or word order correction. Green indicates a suggestion if a different phrasing would work better, or if I felt that you were unclear.  Nice to hear that this discussion is going on in China. I think it's an important one everywhere.  Keep up the good work (and the good attitude!)  - Daniel

Happiness

Happiness is undoubtedly essential in to our mental health and quality of life living qualities. Some people obtain happiness from friendship and family bonds, and some from achieving their goals or simply winning the games. In recent years there emerges a hot topic has emerged about well-being among Chinese people about well-being. and that is interestingly being used for questions The question being asked is (better: the question people are asking is: ‘Are you happy?’

Though happiness is a widely-used word, it can be hard to define because people understand this the word differently, and everyone can define it for themselves as there is no standard measure of happiness. Take me for example. I consider happiness as to be a mental state of peace and richness. I could feel pleasant happy either I stay spending time with my family and friends, or I read reading books or just wandering around alone while listening to some music. Yet another group of there are other people who think they can gain that wealth can bring about happiness as long as they are affluent .  That is true to some extent since money would does bring us a better improve our standard of living and is an incentive for us to do what we like. (I think you mean:  money enables us to do what we like.  It is an incentive for us to work hard, but is that what we like?)

It is exactly because of the hard definition of difficulty defining happiness that there appears to be a wide range of ways (better: so many ways) to achieve happiness. But there are still limited certain factors that are important in obtaining happiness. Firstly,Most importantly: do Follow your heart and take your dreams and hobbies seriously. Only when people are not swayed by others’ opinions that they can they gain real (better: true) happiness. Secondly Also, read more books or go to different places and get exposed to various cultures. We should broaden our minds and always enrich our spiritual world so as to make our life more colorful and experienced our experience (deeper? more meaningful?). Besides, Talk with different kinds of people. whatever they are?? Some you may find interesting, others intelligent or inspiring. Sometimes, what we get from those such communication contact can be far more than we thought expected.

I am so busy

Recently, I have found a job that focuses on sales. It's so busy and I nearly have almost no time to read a book or learn English.
I 'm graduated from a college two years ago,（I want to say I am really remember that time ）but now, I am a big (better: grown) man, I know what should I have to do, I will do my best to take care of my family, I really believe that I can do it!

 

Here are a few corrections.  Good luck with your job, and I hope you can find time to practice your English and have some fun!